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| Axl's wife 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abusei like this story, like the insight into Ellie's tricky little emotions, and i liked the images in this story. i'm trying to write longer reviews because it is better...okay, i liked the descriptions of Craig in this, he seems fragile and broken and Ellie's sort of like and dislike of it at the same time. it was cool the way she felt guilty with jesse but also she didn't feel right with Craig, either, that's like the thing with Ellie, she's always ambivalent in a way. good job with this. |
| giveyourimmortalitytome 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseawesome! the last line is almost chilling, and i think we can all relate to the "fuck love!" mantra. awesome job! |
| Writer4eva123 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abusePoor Ellie...I happen to think that Jesse is a better match for Ellie than Craig is. PMS |