Reviews for Waiting For Atlantis

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Estel's Maiden 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOK this has to stop! I either have to stop reading your Sheppard directed ff or you need to stop being so ** him...poor darlin' :P Great story, and fascinating to think as soon as they blasted through the gate, a dart was there...talk about blistering luck
drufan 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseBeen catching up on the Secret Santa stories...great whump. A nice slice of chocolate cake whump. The Wraith scrambling up mountains sounds plausible to me...they seem to jump and land from great distances. Once again, too much fun!
everybetty 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abuseWOW! that was quite the thrill ride! jumper crashes, ice slides, wall-climbing wraith! and exploding drones. That ws tons of fun. Except for the "I want out" mantra Rodney was chanting-- it gave me heart palpitations! I am seriously claustrophobic and just reading about him being trapped, pinned back and chest making it hard to breathe - it's dark - he didnt even know if there WAS a way out ...ack!! maybe a little TOO well done! Oh, and I loved your idea of using the stun setting on Ronon's gun to numb Rodney's arm. Kudos!!
Valexie 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseThroughly enjoyed. Great team whump. Very vivid in describing the ice cavern, mud bogs and wraith attack. Felt I was in a version of "Cliffhanger", "The Cave", "The Lord of the Rings", and "Aliens". Loved the team interaction, Rodney's constant snark always a favorite. Enjoyed the POV, Teyla's personality so calming; and interesting having our strong man out of the picture after having his bell rung.
Jules47 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseGreat read, I really enjoyed this story very much. Loved the way Rodney was second guessing Shep and Sheps own fears that he maybe had failed his team. Very realistic and so descriptive it was like watching a video episode instead of just reading it. I was there with them as I read. Looking forward to more of your wonderful stories.
Pocus 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseGreat story. It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I really liked it being from Teyla's pov. She has some great insight to her team mates!!
Kodiak Bear Country 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abuseThat was intense! The visuals were just awesome, from the crash to the ice tunnel, to the ice slide and bridge and squeezing through...shivers The wraith climbing up, and they were all so banged up! This was so fantastic, thank you thank you thank you! Yummy h/c and I do love it when they're all whumped LOL!
princessangelwings 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abusefantastic whump as always :)
Teprac S 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseCold miserable whumpage. Well done.
kokomocalifornia 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseexcellent story!
Titan5 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was pretty awesome. The tension of them being chased while injured and battling their own doubts almost had me climbing up on the table with the computer, like that could help anything. I think I chewed off all my fingernails when the Wraith were climbing up the side of the hill and attacking them - nervous wreck!! Rodney's complaining that they should have stayed and John arguing against that, even as he begins to have doubts, was very in character for both of them. But then, you always do a wonderful job with that. LOVED IT - as always!!
Frisco 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseWhe! That was awesome! Thank you so much. Wraith and whump and stranded and an ICE planet to boot. I was getting nervous at the end when the Wraith kept coming up the wall and they were running out of ammo. Lorne to the rescue! Great conflict with the doubt from Rodney. I like how the answer was never given, but McKay decided it on his own. The claustrophobia was a wonderful added bonus. Nice Teyla POV too. LOVED it! Thanks again!
Laura-trekkie 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat team!fic and great whump. I loved their determination, how, injuries or not, they were getting out of there and they were going to hold the wraith off! Not to say I wasn't immensely relieved to hear Lorne's voice when I did. This was a tense story throughout, never knowing where the wraith might appear, never knowing if the path they were taking would be the right way; not knowing how badly injured Ronon was, or how much worse anyone else's injuries might get- especially John's, with the possibility of puncturing a lung never far away; not knowing whether they could hold off the wraith for long enough. Great character insights too, Teyla showing she knows both John and Rodney well, knows how they react to danger and how it often leads to more pointed arguments than their usual banter, knew that Rodney would complain about everything as a coping method, that John would likely be selective in what he said about his injuries. I'm glad they got back mostly in one piece and that Keller was able to get them all fixed up before too long- though not without more demonstration of how much the team care about each other and will loiter about the infirmary even after their own dishcarge :).
CallmeCath 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful! It was also ingenius(?)to use the stunner on Rodney's Arm.:D
CoolBreeze1 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseWow! Excellent. Whumps for everyone! Liked seeing John holding it together despite his brutally painful injury to get everyone else to safety.

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