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| veganwrocker 2008-08-28 ch 1,  | abusecute i like that you interpreted lily as being a hufflepuff, the only problem is that it's not quite canon because she's younger than Albus, so she wasn't at school when he was sorted... |
| ImagingThings 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's good! |
| Winterlude 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved it. Short but poignant. |
| hondagirl 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusethis is good. Maybe it could of been a little more fleshed out like with characters and dialogue but its still pretty good. It gets to what Al's thinking which is exactly what you intended to do. I like it, especially the last line about teasing Lily. What are big brothers for?? hehe |
| mischief manage 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was-er-OK. You kind of have to make it more discriptive and long. Not to mention putting some indents for paragraphs. It was good though but you may need to work on it a bit. Happy Holidays! |