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Reviews For: Toy Solider

SpeedDemon4u
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuse*snif snif* It's sad . Poor Eric , but I'm sure he will get Cal in the end.
A beautiful story :D *thumbs up*
Chiri Kushi
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseAnd of course Ryan is the cranky elf. Perfect.

Calleigh is perfectly in character in this one, especially when she tells Eric that she "can't." Why Calleigh? Why?

I could definitely see Valera as the Christmas spirit of the bunch.

Nicely written, even if the surprise angst wasn't expected. I guess that's why its' a surprise. :p
LeAnneKatherine
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseAww Jodie, you make me want to cry, but in a good way :)- you took those obscure elements and worked them in a angsty fic, it was brilliant, and I really hope there's another part to this because I'd love to see a happy ending :D

LeAnne xx
calleighsthebest
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! I loved it! It flowed so well, it didn´t even seem like you were writting it to fit in the elements! Tenerife is just about hot enough for me, if i go in the summer it kills me, i went to florida twice in the summer and i remember it was stupidly hot, i couldn´t live in it! Anyway, happy new year (soon!)
Le Pecore Nere
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseaw, that's so sad, at the end T^T I could picture that happening too though, I loved it :) great job b^-^d
FluffyBlonde
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseI think i'm going to burst into tears! Its so sad! Please tell me there's a happy ending! Pretty please!
JenniDinoRobot
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseAw! Sad, yet very good. I loved it, yours and Drommie's were the best so far. Keep on keepin on Jodie and Merry Christmas!
Huggs!
::
Jenne
restless-mess
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was so good! I love how you did just make them 'decide to be together'. This was so realistic in terms of the show right now, and I could totally see it happening. I loved how true you were to Eric's character, especially at the very end how he was saying "I won’t cry. You cry for loss and I have not lost her yet.(etc)"... So beautiful and so Eric. Great Job and Merry Xmas!
michelle
2007-12-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell written--in character and beautiful.

I never watched the show regularly, hitting or missing as time permitted. I've been watching the reruns on A&E to catch up. Your story fits right in with how I see Eric and Calleigh's relationship. Nice job.
TwistedSister03
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abusethat was great! nice job =]
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