GOD, i hate cliffhangers !! Chazz is a total bully in this Other than Chazz being a bully ( and the damn cliff hanger ), i love this story.

I LOVE YOUR STORY!! Please continue! :D I wonder what Chazz is gonna do to her, whatever it is, I hope it isnt that bad!! Well.. it obviously is but still!! GREAT STORY!! Please update soon!! XDD

I like this, it's interesting, but a tad bit OC. The thing that I really think you could improve on is being more in the character's voices. And I truely don't think that Chazz is that evil. But I'm really want to see where this is going. Update soon. :)

Oh!! I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!! XD

Dude, that's so freakin mean how Chazz is being so mean to her like that! Maybe if he wasn't such a snob, maybe people would respect him. Anyway, I really liked it, you should keep doing what your doing, it's fine.

Wow, Alexis is pretty dang sweet if she punched a guy on her first day of school. update soon!

Oh dear, Alexis almost got it! o.o Poor girl. That's terrible of the boys. I thought Zane was pretty IC though, which was good. He's so distant. And Alexis was IC too because she didn't go freaking out, rather, was calm. Chazz is so evil. Though I'm not sure about the whole rape thing, but whatever. I'm sure you have an explanation for it.

It was really short and the paragraphs weren't too long. It was just mostly quotations, which isn't bad to have since it helps in character development and interaction, but it would've been nice to have more character description in the form of body language, facial expression, and gestures. You need more non-dialogue parts. There were also some places where you shifted from past to present tense. Just read over it carefully. :P

I hope you don't think I'm being too harsh. ^^; I really am trying to help. I like the idea though, and the story itself. It just needs a bit of work, which I'm sure you'll be more than happy to put into it. I don't even mind that Chazz is being so evil. XD I know you have a master plan for it. :P

I can't wait to see what he has in store for her. Please update soon! And now that it's summer, if you need any help with Beta Reading or anything, you can send it to me and I'll proof it for you. ;P

were the two boys trying to rape alexis?

So that explains why Alexis doesn't like Chazz. xD he's such a jerk to her! Gr... anyways, I love it! Chazz is soo evil!! Poor Chumley! :(

BAD CHAZZ! BAD!! *flicks his nose* I like this!

Oh wow.. Chazz is very evil in this chapter. O.o Poor Alexis! This is a really good story!

when r u doiing the next chapter?!?!?! i cant wait for it! this is so good!

i cant wait for the next chapter! you are really good!

Hi...I read this before I know but I wanted to say that I LOVED your plot and how you portray them all. I want you to update when you can. =D

School is cruel. DX But I love your stories and wish you could update them! ^^

-Waves Valentineshipping Flag- When will their be fluff between Chazz and Alexis if there is one