What an inventive, original, well written story. Kudo's to both of you lovely ladies, and keep on writing.

Love Sonia :)

Fantastic and fantastical - so horrifying and wonderful! Well done.

Simply brilliant.

Oh my God! Excellent story! Truly startling. This last chapter was especially heart breaking though... with the Hermione bit. It made me sick.

Snape was the pivot the canon-story turned around, but he probably thought himself the grit in the cogwheel. Thanks for showing him different.

OMG! I absolutely love your work! This was brilliant! I cried at the part with Hermione and Remus! It was so sad! But this was a work of pure Genius! I am so adding this to my favorites! So cute! Please keep up the work!

Nice story! Finished a bit too quickly for me, but still a good read.

Another brilliant story! I just love your writing style and the thought you give to the plot. The story line is so well drawn and the characters so believable. I thought your use of the room of requirements was brilliant and to summon back Albus as his "guide" into the parallel universe was perfect. Poor Harmione. You could feel her pain throughout the story. I was also glad that you allowed Draco to be a "good guy" of sorts in this one. I hope your muse keeps getting inspired so that we can read more of your wonderful stories about Severus and Harmione.

Very sweet. I've always loved that movie. Jimmy Stewart.

Very nicely adaptation :) As always, thank you for writing

Oh, brilliant. Of course, I expect no less from two of the top writers in this 'ship (and, I daresay, among the fandom at large). Beautifully crafted piece, this. Snape's journey into the altered past was so bitter it was almost hard to read, but it balanced so well against Hermione and Harry's efforts to save him. That juxtaposition helped the reader avoid the morass of nightmare that Snape felt, ramped up hope, and reminded always of what he would lose if her were successful in his suicide.

You even let Severus voice that nod to Dickens in this last chapter, which gave me almost as much of a grin as "Doppeldore." While it's a very engaging read on it's own, I'm also deeply impressed at how you've picked up and built upon some of the major themes of the canon text -- especially the uses of remorse, that emotion that sets Harry, Albus, and Severus apart from Voldemort, no matter what other qualities they may share with him. And I do believe that you nearly wrenched a tear from me at the end of the 2nd chapter. Hermione's utter horror was heartwrenching.

This is cute! I really enjoyed reading this story.

Very well done. I was extremely frustrated that you didn't update WYTI in such a long time (looking back, its really not that long, you've just spoiled us so) but if this fic was the result of the wait it was well worth it. Loved it!

wow scary, you must have gone through every bit where snape helped out. good but scary

Aww, thank you for the lovely Christmas present!