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| Raz3R 2008-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing, amazing, amazing. I just love love love your story. It's really well written and quite easy to understand, unlike some jumbled messes I've been reading in the past. It's great. Just promise to keep up the great work and I'll be reviewing for sure! :) Have fun with it, but don't go way out of line :P I'm glad to see that you really like revising your work, I'm sure you take great pride in it and you should! :) It's really good... like I said, hehe :) I can't wait for your future update to see how this is all going to unfold, I'm quite excited and I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for this :) -Raz3R |
| vintageumbrella 2008-08-23 ch 3, | abuseInsecurities, eh? But I suppose when they meet again like in the summary, they both would have grown up enough. And their current relationship isn't built on trust, only sex. |
| thepurplemaiden 2008-08-23 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter. Looking forward to the next one. I was kind of wondering whether I was reading the right story until you explained how this was what began their relationship. ^^ anyhoo, yes thanks for clearing that in your a/n. |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-08-23 ch 3, | abuseOh man! Things are not running smoothly for Sakura and Syaoran. And the break up is in the next chapter huh...wow this is all so amazing. I'm really enjoying this story. SO MUCH! I'm glad I took the time to start reading it. That's for sure. UPDATE SOON! ~Chica~ |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-08-23 ch 2, | abuseOh damn! Those two do have chemistry. A whole lot of it! ~Chica~ |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseOh damn! Sakura slept with her professor! Scandalous. Wonder what the next chapter will have in store. ~Chica~ |
| CheeseyCraziness 2008-08-18 ch 3, | abuseI'll disagree with "more than just one hit for a castle to collapse," slightly - if both participants in the relationship are EXTREMELY obstinate, to the point where neither is willing to give up their pride to apologize, then one huge blow -can- destroy it all entirely. Or, if one is unable to cope with such pressure, is too young for it, and so runs from the problem - then it can be a single blow that forces them apart. But - at the same time, I agree. Sakura and Syaoran... They'd get past one bad argument. Now, two, or three? Less likely. I |
| Adeen 2008-08-18 ch 3, | abuseAww Naoko is leaving!! I can't wait to see what happens next with Sakura...poor Naoko |
| whitewave16 2008-08-17 ch 3, | abuseLooking forward to the next chapter. |
| rosedreamer101 2008-08-12 ch 3, | abuseomg plase update! |
| Luvia 2008-08-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow, you are very talented :) Please, keep up the great work. |
| lil.ramen.lover 2008-08-12 ch 3, | abuseI'm glad you haven't rushed into the break up already. We get to see the real in-depth problems that Sakura and Syaoran had. ANd I agree with the fact that the closer you are to a person, the least likely you are to notice that person's problems. Great job so far! UPDATE SOON PLEASE |
| Adeen 2008-06-21 ch 2, | abuseWow...steamie! I loved it! Please up-date again as soon as possible!! I loved it!! |
| vinh 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abuseInteresting plot. Can't wait to read more. |
| pink-strawberries 2008-06-17 ch 2, | abuseO i just love the whole forbidden relationship between teacherXstudent...totally hot stuff!^^ please update soon!! |