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Marie-Ruth
2009-08-16 . chapter 60
Great story!


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Janie7819
2009-08-06 . chapter 60
Just wanted to drop a line and let you know that that was an amazing story. I am so glad I took the time to read it. You really nailed the emotional torture. I am looking forward to readin more by you.
SciFiRN
2009-07-26 . chapter 60
Okay just caught up and I'm being lazy and reviewing the last 5 chapters I read together because this is the last chapter. Great job with the excellent story. I enjoyed each chapter. I will say that I wish there would have been some kind of love for Sam from Mary, but with the exception of that; I have no complaint.

Thank you so much for finishing the story!
darksupernatural
2009-07-25 . chapter 60
This was an awesome ride. Thanks so much for sharing such a complex, wonderful story with us.
FallenAngel218
2009-07-23 . chapter 60
I have enjoyed this story since chapter one, and I am glad you ended it this way. You are a very good writer, and I look forward to more of your fiction. :)

Angel
apieceofcake
2009-07-23 . chapter 60
Have enjoyed, thank you!
sylviefer
2009-07-22 . chapter 59
I am sorry but I found this story far too long. I am French what can explain this comment, although I usually read English.
Another blame, who looks only at me, I read 80 % of chapters in diagonal, French expression, I had believed to understand that you were Sammygirl, and I read your story for that, I admit you that I did not finish it.
In fact all your story is mostly about Dean I thus finished by sauté all the chapters, very, very numerous or it was question only of him.
In your story Sam is only a secondary character, without big depth, and without dialogue or almost.
Why, for example, have in spite of circumstances have erased the beautiful story of love between Dawn and Sam and have developed so much that between Dean and Raine.
I hope that you will not be too much irritated by my comments, but in fact I was extremely disappointed
CowboySteel
2009-07-22 . chapter 60
This was an EPIC story. Really brilliant. Well done ;) x
Kelly
2009-07-22 . chapter 59
Wow, what a rush. This whole story has been. INTENSE :) Excellent. My only little bit of sadness here is that the whole time Mary was here, she didn't talk to Sam or touch him or anything at all. Yeah, she said he wouldn't die and she did gaze lovingly at him for a moment but I just found it sad that she never said anything to him yet she told Dean he was her greatest accomplisment. What was her second son then? Chopped liver?

It reminded me of when John showed up at the end of season two. He looked at Sam briefly but all his interation was with Dean and then people have the gall to write that Dean came in second in anything with his father.

Although, I suppose, if you're a Dean girl, it would make sense because you would only want her to focus on Dean.

Oh well, still a good story, I just thought that was very sad. Especially since Sam was the one who could see her.
drkstormynite
2009-07-22 . chapter 60
Bambers:
Well done! *gives standing ovation*
What a wonderful story this has been. While not always easy to read (wow you hurt the boys a lot!) it was well written and I enjoyed each chapter!
So, what will you do next? Take up knitting? No! More fic!
Thanks again.
Blessings!
sunnyjunedays
2009-07-22 . chapter 60
Hi, That was the perfect ending, so Winchester.
I have loved every minute of this story, you have taken me through every emotion possible and kept me hooked throughout, thank you. x
SamDeanLover28
2009-07-22 . chapter 60
excellent
SamDeanLover28
2009-07-22 . chapter 59
excellent
sunnyjunedays
2009-07-22 . chapter 59
Hi, You had me in tears with the end of this chapter. Dean and his mom, that was beautifully written and so emotional.
Loved it. x
monkeymuse
2009-07-21 . chapter 60
An out standing Job. This fic had it all Pain hurt love warmth, loss regaining all that was taken... WOW! Great Job...
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