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| lily moonlight 2008-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this. Flack is gorgeously drawn - from his memories as a choir boy to his 'profane prayer' perfect. What an image too of him shaking and burning in his private hell. It was so richly evoked that I was almost there amongst the pews. |
| ChocoBetty 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseYes, yes, YES! You just made my lunchbreak with Mac calling Peyton. I'll see when I will continue reading. Unfortunatly lunchbreak is over... :( |
| Elainhe 2008-01-18 ch 5, | abuseHm. I don't like Sinclair. Never have (can you imagine my guilt over that, being South African?). And, you don't help. I ADORE Flack though. More and more. And, that is (almost) all your doing too. :) |
| Elainhe 2008-01-18 ch 4, | abuseHow do I respond? Perfect. Just how I'd see it happening. |
| Elainhe 2008-01-18 ch 3, | abusePerfect characterization of Mac, imo. I love how the word "coward" can be interpreted in more than one way here, and also the subtle reference to Mac's past. |
| Elainhe 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseOh, the images. Danny's description of each team member's involvement is spot on. Lovely end line. :) |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 13, | abuseThis last part is a brillant finale! I love the way this ended, and I loved danny's explaination of the holiday. i'll nver be a D/L shgipper but I do love the D/L in the world that you;ve created for them. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 12, | abuselol I loved the way Mac handled Sinclair. He played on everything he knew as a CSi. Sinclair deseved it and Peyton's back! It's good to see everythign falling into place for everyone. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 11, | abuseOOKies even I was a little bit scared in this chapter! Glad that Stella is okies tho. i lvoed the way Don had to get on with his job despite the fact he was so obv longing to be with Stella. The last part of this chapter was simply perfect. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 10, | abuseYou portray your interperation of the relationship between Mac and Stella well here. I like the way they can be somwhat open with each other, and your plot has devloped well, it's natural and doesn't seem out of place. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 9, | abuseYou captured the spirit of Sid quiet well! I enjoy the background you give us on each holiday, it feels like I'm learning as well s enjoying. I had to laugh when Flack bit that coin. i was nice to see the little connection between him and Stella there. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 8, | abuseI ike the way you gave hm worryng about what they are. I can really see danny doing that in a relationship he cares about! |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 7, | abuseI thought this was a really heart warming chapter. The last line says it all. Your fic makes me like the whole D/L pairing, the way you write the chars is astonding! I like Flack's little smirk to himself. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 6, | abuseI adore the fact that Flack can read Danny without a second thought, the end of the chapter warmed my hand and it was nice to see that Danny rant o Flack. |
| Aphina 2008-01-09 ch 5, | abuseI can so imagaine him doing this. Sinclair was a complete bastard! I'd have slammed the door that hard too! Good for Flack sticking up for mac and the team! |