Well it had a lot of potential but the end was rushed. But you finished it and didn't leave us hanging.

great story

this was really good,. well done!

This was a story that was realistic. I enjoyed to the fact that is was fictional, but also made me realize the life I had to live. Very close to what I when through.

I enjoyed you story and will be reading anything you put out their. thank you again. you are a very good writer.

Great story! Absolutly luved it! :D

loved the story

that was a good story glad taht everything worked out

THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

great chapter

This was a great story! But like some other has said the end was a bit rushed and the love between B and E didn't have time to grow. But otherwise very well written and great story :)

Hugs from Finland

-Hanna

this story was so good. amazing really. i couldntve stop to take a break if i had wanted to. hope your doing fine.

That was a WONDERFUL story! i am very sorry for your miscarriage and i truly hope that you will be ok. i may not no you but nobody should have to go through that. take your time to get over it, im sure the people on fanfiction will understand.

omg omg absoltley absoltley loved it thanks for the lovley story xdxdxd

This was a really great story and i am sorry about your loss but i just wanted you to know that you are a great writer i would be pleased to read anything that you write I will be the first one to buy your first book

The story seems to be a little bit "choppy"; it doesn't really flow well. Also, wouldn't Bella be more reluctant to go on a date after all that she's been through?