Awesome story..I can't wait to see where it goes :D
Please update if u have the time ^-^

Intriguing story. I'm really curious about what Nanoha has forgotten. And how does Alicia come into the picture? I hope you have not abandoned this story and will continue with it soon.

gah, So confused, and seeing how you updated months ago...I get the feeling we'll be in the dark for a while, neh? Well, hope youupdate soon; the cliffhanging anxiety is killing me! Nontheless, wonderfully written- I tip my hat to you.

hmm...I'm just as uncertain as Nanoha is in this story lol xD

I'm very much hooked on your story, though I'm not sure, if anything I'm starting to feel as if Alicia did exist even if Fate thinks otherwise. So here's what I think, Nanoha did know Alicia, Alicia was once alive. These dreams that Nanoha's been having can actually be a lost memory, a horrible memory that brought Nanoha into a shocked state of mind and eventually she managed to seal said memory deep into a part of mind and has forgotten about til this day. Then again this can all be wrong since everyone seems to hate Yunno so reasons unknown to us >.> also Fate's been acting a little weird too...

*shrug* I really can't wait to see where this story goes, so please update soon :D

GAH i'm so confused yet intrigued... you MUST continue this... GAH It's all a lie! But i dont want Fate's real name to be Alicia... or um I DONT WANT yuuno, BUT tis true it's better tu use an existing character so peopel dont get confused...

the seriousness and descriptiveness of this fic really got me..
and the types of people like you are really potential writers.. but well.. all of us here are.. Your punctuations and fragments are kind of.. amusing.. it makes the fic a lot more dramatic..
nice job with this fic.. really hope you'll finish it soon.. ^^
oh! and i like your prologue.. it had a nice tone and outline.. :]

Mind boggling. That's what this is, absolutely mind boggling. Though I suppose that was the intended affect the story is suppose to have on us readers. So with two more excellent chapters come another slew of questions that raises many suspicions, especially the case with Hayate and the knights reaction to Yuuno and Nanoha. Though what surprised me the most was probably the interaction between Fate and Signum at the end. The part between Nanoha and Yuuno was interesting to, despite what it may entail. It's definitely going to be fun watching those two interact, hell it's going to be even more interesting to see how Fate deals with all of this, first being mistaken for someone who may or may not exist, then not truly being remembered by supposed best friend, then to top it all of, knowing Nanoha kinda remembers Yuuno, well at least a lot more than she does Fate. Ah, so much going on for Fate, with none of it being good. Well, here's hoping for more excellent chapters from this one and all your other fics.

Okay, how the hell did I miss this? Anything that starts with an E and ends with a 9 in the MGLN section I read. Bah. I blame it for me only focusing on looking out for your R of E fic. Well my stupidity aside at missing this awesome fic for so long, this looks promising, with so much too work with and so many ways this could go, this is definitely going to be another keeper. Though there is just one thing I hope you don't mind I point out, when Nanoha tells Fate, "I thought...I thought you've died..." It's just doesn't sound right, and I don't want to say it's not proper English even though I believe it isn't, because I'm no English major. So may I recommend instead, I thought you had died, or I thought you were dead, as perhaps a replacement? Either way, I still loved the chapter and I'm off to read the other ones.

My, my, this is really interesting and I am so looking forward for the next chapter. You out some many questions and offer no answers. Please, do update and continue this sotry soon. I really can't wait. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

It's an interesting fic but VERY confusing. I'll be looking out fo this one, I wanna know what happened.
Besides, its eventual NanoFate...

Nice chapter and interesting stories so far, though I am curious as to what happened to Hayate. I am still sticking to my YU ME theory, though as to which reality is real, well I still haven't made up my mind yet, though I am currently leaning towards Fate reality rather than Alica reality.

I get the feeling that this will become YU ME (the webcomic by Megan Rose Gedris) esque in what is going on with Nanoha. If you have read that recently, you'll know what I am talking about, if not, well you might not want to read it until you finish this story, so as to not alter your plans for the story by trying not to copy her.

Interesting chapter, really. It reminds me some scifi/other genre I've watched/read. I have some theories what is going on, but I most possible has something to do with time. Or is it something like Butterfly effect I (II was unwatchable crap)?

Anyways I'm looking forward for next.

Nice update as usual. I loved the dream sequence. You truly showed Alicia's personality there and I really liked the talk of the future and how you described Alicia's dream. Yunno's part was done well also. You portrayed Nanoha's uncertainty and awkwardness mixed with Yunno's insecurity.

Yay you introduced the Knights! But they're probably not knights in here... they sound cold and detatched. For some reason when I read their appearance, they sounded like spies or something...

Well I'm trying to piece everything together, but you still haven't given out much... Well I'm guessing Alicia didn't end up becoming a freelance journalist because of the mention of a laboratory. Another theory came up in my head... It sounds wacky, but I'll say it anyway. I think that what's happening right now is what Nanoha forgot. That everything with Alicia is actually in the future and now Nanoha is in a coma in the future dreaming about the stuff we are reading now...Okay that sounded very weird, but yeah another theory added to my list yay! I'm having too much fun thinking of all the possiblities.. even though the story keeps giving me a headache. Maybe I'm a masochist @_@

Anyway good job and keep it up! Hopefully you'll give out SOME answers next chapter. NOT ALL OF THEM since it'll totally ruin the fun.

Kinda confused, anyways AWESOME chapter and story please update soon XD!