 i-embrace-OCD 2007-12-25 . chapter 1That was sweet. A little odd (too romantic for Toph, maybe? I don't know), but it was lovely, and I really like how you repeated what you said at the beginning (with the "She knew, she had fallen for him..." bit). That was nice, and "She didn’t know why the butterflies picked her as their home," was good, too. A lot of good lines.
Merry Christmas to you, too! :) |