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Reviews For: A little Rumor , A Big Problem

Isabell89
2008-06-22
ch 1,
abuseI liked this story very much, it was a very different take on the pregnancy/pregnancy-scare storyline and interesting to read. You portrayed Danny and Lindsays' emotions well; having never been pregnant myself nor having taken a pregnancy test before I know just as little as you do about the emotions involved in such an event but I like to think that you did well. And just the thought of a D/L baby was enough to make me smile, even though the story had a sad tone to it.

Oh, and even if Mac was indeed a tiny bit OOC (which I think might only have been the case on the two occasions you wrote out his thoughts), those lines were so hilarious that I didn't mind one bit :-)
LiaBelle
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. Loved the use of "Lindsayland"
SaraLou
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseLoved this...very sweet...

With regards to reactions, it varies from person to person. My first (and hopefully last for a while) test came back negative and I was so happy. I was too young, and so not ready. But my cousin and her fiance were upset when hers came back -ve. I think with regards to Lindsay and Danny, that you captured their emotions (or at least what I think their emotions would be) well. They are a proper grown up couple, and have a proper grown up relationship (man...can't wait to have one of them lol)
IGottaFindYou
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseI've seen that commercial, many a time...always found that "Most sophisticated thing...' line to be a bit awkward...

Great story, though. Loved it.
DAnNSfreak
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseHehehe. I was close to laughter throughout the whole thing. That was very entertaining. Well written!
ObessedTWFan
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseI liked this one a lot it shows that even the toughest or what appears to be the toughest can have a little moment for just a brief second the shields come down and we get to see the weak side we try so hard to hide. Terrific job and call me stupid but how did DL become Canon? Maybe if I watched the show I would know what that meant huh?
katydid13
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseCute! I think you captured Lindsay's feelings well.
ReJo
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseI've never been pregnant, either, and I've never known anyone who has gone through a similar situation, but it was a heartwarming story. Very believable and respectfully handled.
pineylife
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseNice story. I really enjoyed it. I liked the ending though, with Mac, Lindsay, and Danny.

Yeah! D/L!
ncisabbylover
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abusenice work i loved it
love abbylover
citeyoursource
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseAww, that was a really good fic. Great job!
And I've seen that commercial, lol. Now whenever I see it, all I'm gonna think about is a little Messer/Monroe running around the lab. =]
KatKnits00
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abusePersonally I think you need another chapter in which Mac busts the rumor spreaders big time. Maybe with the help of his team, Danny & Lindsay in particular.
ker
2007-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseloved this!

I have never been or thought I was pregnant either, but I think you wrote their reactions very well!

any plans for more?
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