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| zandermon 2008-09-20 ch 25, | abuseyou have outdone yourself ,MUST READ BOOK SIX! |
| thugondarel 2008-09-11 ch 14, | abuseYou know, I usually visualize one of your chapters as like a 30 minute episode of digimon and stuff, but with this one. It seems like Chapters 1-14 is like a Digimon Dimensions The Movie sort of things.lol |
| Renteka-Bond 2008-09-10 ch 5, | abuseRey = Takato |
| Renteka-Bond 2008-09-10 ch 3, | abuseOh my god, that's so funny, cuz I've read all of those. STILL waiting waiting on the pregnant cave one to update... |
| Dragonfire411 2008-02-15 ch 25, | abuseThis is a good story. I'm working on a story too. Check it out sometime. |
| Jen 2008-02-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseRey daughter of Rika and Takato digimon are decreasing because the maker is gone this is way to obvious |
| EarthBorn0 2008-02-02 ch 25, | abuseYay. I think that the book had a diligent ending and in perfect sync. I liked the 42 referrence too. :) I'll go on to reading the next part now... |
| Krow Blood 2008-01-29 ch 25, | abuseY'know, After reading all your stories, Again, I am startig to wonder, How The Hell do you keep all this inside your mind? |
| Redrover117 2008-01-29 ch 25, | abuseWell thought out chapter, Ryder has got a lot of problems don't he. Can't be helped I guess, I can't wait for the next book espeicially considering the teaser you just gave us. It looks like thew actions about to start picking up. Great work. |
| keetongu 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abuseAwsomeness. I knew "42" would end up in here eventually. Yay Hitchhiker references! |
| Chaos Blademaster 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abuseO...What a teaser! Seems to me like you have some VERY interesting things planned. Not forgetting that now Renamon has to reveal a huge secret. Hm...like Tamer like partner...I wonder what Terriermon will do with THIS information. I suspect that HE leaks all the inside info to Digital Watch! |
| Khajmer 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abuseThe chapter was pretty standard (and very much annoying in it's lack of answers for the bajillion questions everyone has), but I must say, brilliantly done with the preview for Tricks. The entire story gets an A- for excellent writing and storytelling, but nowhere near enough answers. |
| Revan1st 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abusehoh... kick in the butt 1. Mari is mad at Ryder 2. epiolog (bold) rocks :D |
| E.S. Simeon 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abuseThe chapter is rather done well with even more background information on Ryder... but too bad things did not turn out well for him, haha. "The truth is not always the best thing" fits perfectly for Ryder, ha what an unlucky guy... Oh well, the text of the story fits in pretty good with how everything seem to roll out into the flow of the story. Now that everything is here and in place for the next chapter, things are about to pick up in their pace and hopefully get on with the real story that's to come with Dimensions... haha... Now, I really like how the dream parts all rolled out... it's insipid, but that is what's good about it, because it is just like a video game moment with all that building up. But oh dear at the end of this chapter, thanks to Terriermon everything is about to explode into complications... |
| Crazyeight 2008-01-28 ch 25, | abuseThis was a rather nice chapter. Some nice insights into the life that Ryder had before ending up in the Tamer's world (from what I've read his desires, goals, and focus were somewhat different in those days), though it seemed like Mari was rather quick to get angry with him after nearly losing him twice, especially since he was honest with her about it. Interesting that Mari went for a semi-'Rika'-ish appearance with her hairstyle, and Ryder seems to be doing rather well in the physical department after surviving his second close brush with death. Seems kind of unreal...*shrugs* Hope that Ryder and Mari can patch things together without too much trouble. O And Renamon had a digi-egg?! Renamon was pregnant?!?! When did THAT happen?! I don't remember anything happening between Guilmon and Renamon in the last chapter. ... Terriermon is so dead. XD Later. -Crazyeight |