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| katiesquilts 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseAw, poor Tatsuki! Who would be seeing Orihime? Ishida? Definitely not Ichigo, maybe Chizuru? I dunno, but I hope you continue this story! It's really good! |
| Hotaru-ai 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusei'm torn! I have to say... the bittersweet ending is KILLING me. cause its always sad when its not happy. but at the SAME TIME i feel that it works really well. the thing i'm most curious about: who's 'hime-chan seeing? (I'm almost afraid to ask because my inner yaoi fangirl will probably start screaming [mainly at me] if its Ichigo... man she's scary) anyway. yeah. i really enjoyed this. just so you know. :D ~H-ai |
| Riozaki 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a real OUCH! poor tatsuki-chan... haiz... guess, you're really not allowed to love your best friend, huh?? oh well... touchy... hehehe nice one~! |
| RavenRoth1000 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusePLEEASE!! Don't stop!! ;_; |
| General-Commissar 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it, brilliance it is. I'm suddenly finding lots of ACTUALLY DECENT stories lately, this is one i'll follow as best i can. Inspiration can be a swine, yes, i should know (10 months of writer's block REALLY isn't funny, trust me). Just keep going as best you can, and don't stop writing. We all need release at times. Keep it up! |
| Chival 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really it =) You are planning to write more chapters aren't you ? If not... well you should, it's a wonderful beginning. |
| hessan 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely a good seed, but if this was supposed to be a one-shot, the resolution needs to be better. I agree that this should go to the prom. =D |
| 4th Floor Panda 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lovely read. Very bittersweet but I believe that only adds to its charm. A resolution would be grand but I completely understand the issue of inspiration being such..argh sometimes. It never stays long enough. Sad sad. This work is well on its own but it also has some great potential. If you ever expand on it I'll be sure to be one of the first to read it. --4th Floor Panda |
| Final Fight 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWell first off I'd say that if you do continue it (which you should), then you ought to go over into the 'M' rating (you're already half-way there anyway). And I swear that at least 30% of me saying that isn't just the fact that I likes me some smut. Anyway, I would recommend a chapter of feelings being dealt sorted, then a chapter at the prom, and then a chapter of smutty smut. And of course breaking those into further chapters is highly recommended. Great job so far! |