hahaha... omg! i wanna see what happens next? hahaha cant wait

I can't wait to see where this is going! Update soon ^.^

love the story! like really! please update as soon as possible! :3

Nice writing to begen with on the first chp. I also read Never Let Go, so that is why you must cont. since the NLG was so good the TPD must go on, you can't let it hang. Pls update soon. Hope everything is well with you.

Hey Guubear, nice fic so far. But it's mid year 2008 and you wrote this back at Christmas 2007...I know I certainly want an update. I love ShizNat dates, even when they are thrown out of whack by the likes of Nao. And I'm with the others in longing for some good MaiKoto lovin'!

Update please!

OH SNAP! XD This is going to be one hell of a ride! ;)

This is pretty funny...I hope you update soon!

still alive author?
when ur going to update this fic?
so long to wait for such a nice story!! T.T

Oh..what will happen next? I want to know so don't forget to update...

lol...fuuka fun land. hahaha...

bwah i was thinking of the doomtrain guardian force from FF8. =D glad to see youre posting again. pls continue. :D

renny-chan

D-Doomtrain... Somehow, that's perfect. Everyone ended up at the amusement park, and- this- what's this, a quasi-quadra-date? Ish, since Shizuru and Natsuki don't know they're being followed and now their rollercoaster's about to live up to its name.
A box? With velvet. The romantic in me says ring, and then says it's way too soon for that, so...anniversary? Though I think if she tried to propose on a rollercoaster Shizuru might end up swallowing the ring/gift/mystery item, and that...would not be good. Hah, this is what I needed. Something lighthearted and /good/. Update soon?
~Naolin

why I feel like someone going to be killed. ^^?
haha I hope it's Nao.

oh my ..xD poor natsuki and shizuru ...that thing is broken...lol

I WANT MORE PLEASE^^

lol ya doomtrain is a Gf (cant believe i forgot that...) the story is great, i love your interactions between those two, probably one of the more real depictions =) dont take your time with the next chapter please lol

hmm, i sense fun things happening to the couple. i knew Doomtrain sounded familiar! it does sound like a cool roller coaster ride.

lol, best line: “These feel better than hands. Natsuki should hold Shizuru’s boobies.”

i eagerly await for the next chapter =)