 adara13 2008-01-14 . chapter 1I really liked this little aside. Helped to sort out the plot lines in my head and what all's happening to Antares. Plus, of course, I kinda of adore your interpretation of Poppy so I'm always glad to see something with her POV! Poor Antares though. Everything wrong always seems to happen to him... |
 deepthoughtz 2007-12-26 . chapter 1"Chapter Title?" You're going to go with this and leave AFT hanging in the wind, aren't you? :(
It was okay, I guess. Only a little, information, and no action. Feels as if you're setting a stage. I just would've liked that stage to be AFT.
At least you updated. :) |