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friendsrox001
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseaw that was very cute. The problem did seem like a typical thing for Ross and Rachel to fight about. I also liked how you ended it.
bundespy
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseI loved this, this is really great, it's more real than many fics I've read, not too good, nor messed up...
I could really picture them like that. Of course having good and bad day like everyone...

Anyway, keep posting stories please, I miss checking in here often to see if you've updated a story...
Exintaris
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseMissed this in all the Christmas activity. This is good - a much more realistic take on what their life might be like than some. But I have to say, I found Rachel's avoiding saying goodbye to Ross in the show totally implausible, though you do your best to justify it.
LittleOneWeasley
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseLoved It.
You should coonsider continuing this story, it has potential and it's well written.
friendsfan
2008-01-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt is a great fic, I love it already I hope you continue it soon.
brucasroks
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abusehey great story! I had forgotten how beautiful ross and rachel were. This is so realistic. THIS is what RnR really are! far from perfect but wonderful! wow caity ur some writer! cheers to u! cherry!
Exotic
2008-01-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseWONDERFUL WONDERFUL .. I Loved it ,, Great fic that really moved me , you should've seen my expression LOL ,, keep up the good work and we want similar fics CONTINUE ;p
RnRfan629
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseLoved it, but I love all of your stories. You always write Ross and Rachel so well and stick to their characters. This story is a perfect example of what makes Ross and Rachel so great. Their relationship is not wrapped in a pretty little bow. They are angsty and there is always some sort of drama but that is why we love them. No matter what they've been through they will always love eachother and find a way to make it work. Really great job!
Imagine what if
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseA well-written snapshot of a day in the life of our favorite couple. You know ... as right as Phoebe as during the show I think she was wrong when she said "They are perfect for each other". Ross/Rachel are far from perfect as a couple and you illustrate that well in this story. Their love-affair in the show was not real ... or even close to it. It was dictated by economics and profitability ... not love. If they had stayed together after season 4 ... how long would the show lasted for?

I really liked these:

"I called Phoebe. She can watch Emma tomorrow so you can work late." - A not-so-random act of kindness on Ross' part. I love the fact that he can put her feelings before himself.

"Thank you," she whispered. - A few words from her mouth that made it all worth while to for him.

Ross was so insecure about her love for him ... anything to build his confidence made him feel like the king-of-the-world.

I have one question though, you use the qualifier "wicked" a lot as in "wicked random". What do you mean when you use it in this context?

I hope you get your writing inspiration back soon enough ... my muse has left me with a number of chapters left to write in my story. Oh please come back to me my muse!
Peopleschamp1
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou should denfinitely write more. I love Ross and Rachel.
Tommyboy
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell done, it is good to see there are still writers, its a good christmas present.
N/A
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is great. I think that this will be really good. I feel everything in this story.
RossandRachelandemma
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou really pulled out all of the stops in this one. I like how real it felt. Like they have been through so much that when they fight it is serious, but they still love each other so much. I think this is one of the best fics I have read in a long time. Keep it up.
john.doe
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThank was really good! I hope you write more soon!
ross4rach
2007-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it! My little review will not give you enough justice. It was really good. The way you played out their emotions,especially Rachel's cause in the show up until the end they really hidden her emotions toward Ross. I hope my review will hype you up to write more. I can't wait. I hope you get bored again.
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