Great story,it was sad when Legato died though,but still it was a good fic.

This story was alright I liked the first one better. _ I didnt like the OOC-ness but it wasn't that bad. Cool fic.

This story was great, depressing, but great. I have to say that I liked the other story better, but you still wrote this one well. I hate how people always twist the whole Knives/Legato thing, Legato is just an extreme masochist/morbid romantic with a seriuos hero-worshipping complex. *Hands pocky, pixy stix and mountain dew before running away, laughing madly*

That was so awsome. It was the best fanfic that I have ever seen. I love KnivesxLagato fics!

Good God! You have such wonderful talent, yet all you do is point out your mistakes! I possitively adored the story, and I think you did very well.

I'll consider it an alternate reading of the episode... and a good one. As OOC as it may be, Knives talking to Legato after his death touched me. Excellent job.

omg I LOVE IT! The weird thing is that, I wondered why Knives went (more) nuts at the end and I tried to come up with this idea that he was mad about Legato dieing or something. So this story pretty much summed up my idea!
heheh. Well anyway. Nicely written!
SaZ

Yes. Definitally OOC. ...Not that I care. Well written.
But really... Please don't use so many exclamation marks in a row. It DOESN'T emphasize the sentence more.

That was really, really good! I loved it. Hope there's an 'afterlife' sequal. OOC bonanza? Who care's; it still works. (Besides, we don't know what they're like behind closed doors. (chuckling))

Can I marry this fic? Please? *L* j/k. Seriously, I enjoyed the second part even more.

Excellent, both this and the one before it were very well written. Don't worry about the OOC-ness, it makes it all the better.)

I liked this version much, much better then the first. Good job on the rewrite..

Whee! Liked the original, *loved* the rewrite. That little scene at the end between Vash and Knives was extremely sweet. I suppose there's no way to write a sequel to this story, but I want more! (Damn, it DID turn out sadly in the end with Legato dying, but I s'pose that's inevitable...) Great fic.

AWESOME fanfic, Annie-chan! I really liked it, even IF Knives and Legato were really OOC. _ Really well written. I had a feeling that Vash never did "bury" Legato. Kinda sad...I dunno... ;

You added the scene at the end! _ Whoo! It really helped end the story much better than before! Wonderful re-write, definately so much better than the first. The last scene was well done, and just... helped to conclude the fic a bit better, comming full circle. Oh, and the first scene's new too, right? I like it, sort of like a prologue for the second scene, very good additions, both. And transfering the script form of legato's death to story form was done very well too. I liked how everything was done in seperate paragraphs, it really brought out the emotions in that scene. Two thumbs up!