please update soon i love this story...

I've only read the first chapter so far and I am impressed!! Very well written!! I'll definitely be reading on :)

This is lovely!Please update soon!

OMG! o come on u hav got to bring fred back around b4 its 2 l8 plz? this is a gr8 fic so plz plz plz write the next chapter soon

aw so sad : (

i srsly love this story so pleasse update

I can't wait to see what happens

PLEASE UPDATE,
MissDepp4eva

I know you've already posted the second chapter to this, and I"ll reaview that one too, But i jsut want you to know I lvoe this story! The characters are perfect and I love the story line!

Great Story,
MissDepp4eva

E! You wrote chapter two! NOW, I think you should work towards the goal of chapter three, four, eight. Or how many ever you want to write, lol. Anyway, this chapter was really good and I can't wait for some more. Because I think something interesting's gonna happen. -cough-

aw I waited like amost eight months for this it's to short! More please!

AH NO

This was great. I like how you focus on the emotions of both Fred and Mary. Oh and you have enough reviews to continue now, lol.

aw love this :D
update soon :)
x

*looks all over the place*
Where's the rest? You can't leave it there! Please update! Please!!
This was so good, it's really well written and really believable as well. I just wish this had actually happened in the movie! I was so upset when he died at the end and he wouldn't go to her! Damn man! Too hot for his own good.
Please update, I can't wait to read more.
Ciao for now
~Starsword~

Great story, love it, u have got to write more plz :)

I liked that a lot! I wanna hear more!

Please continue, this looks like it has real potential!