interesting...

Intrigueingly (sp?) psychological. A fairly powerful piece. Think you might churn out more like it? 'Twould be greatly appreciated.

Oh Goddess. That blew my mind. Alanna-perfect. The song-perfect. Everything-perfect.
My heart broke with hers.

Sad...definitely NOT the type of thing I had to read right now, but sad...

hey, yeah it's my story, i just wanna say thanks 4 reviewing!

Pretty cool 's the greatest song in the world(besides anything by matchbox twenty!)That was a good great,but good!

Awwww, that's so sad! I wonder if Alanna felt like that.

i love this song! i think it's a great song to use for alanna, and i like how you portrayed her in this story. great story!

wldnt it be super woman? just a thougt n e way i loved this it shows she has another side 2 often ppl only write her as the hero and it makes her kinda flat and two dimentional i think this is realy good it shows her corage and her skills and her love but also her fear her sensativity her wories