this is amazing so far. i don't have any critique, so i'll just await the next chapter.

Great beginning of story ! EdxWin needs more love. Please update soon !

great fic! best one i've read in a while. keep it up :D

Oh, yay!

I like your writing style; it seems very familiar and easy to read though I don't think I've seen anything by you before. I do hope you continue this, because there surely needs to be more Ed+Winry stories out there.