nice fic, but there're a few things. 1) plentiful typos >< it messes with my OCD 2) description please! honestly, it get slight confusing cause of lack of description 3) it doesn't fit the name or the summary.
other than those things the only thing that'd make this better would be if you UPDATED! ^^"
much loves
~Evelynn

Aw fluffy! How cute!

It's a good story, but there are a few spelling mistakes. Apart from that, it's really cute =)

ok this is the first "elricest" story I've read.

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU elricest FANS?!?! ARGH! That's so creepy!

But yeah this was an ok story :) pretty basic, but nice.

BUT WEIRD!