 cottongreentea 2009-10-20 . chapter 4EHey! HOLY COW! This fic has been revived! I thought you abandoned it. I had to re-read the whole thing! Whoo!
Great chapter! I love it! I think my favorite part of this fic is that Athrun gets petrified of needles. LOL! My cousin is like that and he cries when he talks about it. LOL. And he's a grown man too.
It's funny seeing how soft and scared Athrun is. At least Cags is there to protect him and reassure him. AW. It's like they switched places. I think Zehina is adorable! It be wicked if they also attacked Cags. Makes the fic cooler!
Hope you update soon! pz out! |
 Melicress 2008-12-23 . chapter 3O, that was intense. you're really good at writing suspense stories :) |
 Emerald Leviney 2008-08-05 . chapter 3hey! This story is great!! So interesting please please update soon! I love your writing! |
 Milisante 2008-08-04 . chapter 3Sorry for the late review! I really ran out of time(
Well, You should have said 'too much blood' in the begining=) Lol Just joking! =)
I still wonder what's going on... hm... but Athrun suffers so much... poor thing! heh
And what about the girl? Is she for real?
Am I mising something? heh... Anyway, sorry)
That was a good chapter! Update soon! |
 Milisante 2008-03-05 . chapter 2Oh, it's interesting! A little bit complicated, but there's something really mysterious inside. I'm not good at such things^^ I mean supernatural. Though I've got some thoughts^^
But I'd like you to write more^^
And, well, your Athrun looks and acts like the real one! That's great!
Update soon! |
 Infinite sky 2008-01-28 . chapter 2OMG!! who is that girl?? Does she posses something or what?? I am so anxious to know!! * jumps up and down*
BORACE!! He is dead? DEAD? * looks nervous around*
Who or better said What killed him? ARGH! THis fic is so damn full of suspense...
okay wait, did the girl somehow MERGED into Athrun? becuase she had blue eys!! and wait...that girl can read minds?? HOLY CRAP!
Update this one soon, its such a refreshing and unique story :D. |
 reckless-rage 2008-01-27 . chapter 2O.o O.o O.o O.o This is nerve-wracking. Are you trying to give me a heart-attack?? Athrun can't die! I forbid it! (bars your way) Hehe. ^^
So, I can't wait to see the next chapter up and running! Why were his eyes blue? Where's the little girl?? Is Borace an assassin? x.x I really liked this story, and I can't wait to see how it pans out! Hooray for Athrun~ |
 Melicress 2008-01-27 . chapter 2Ek! Another assasin?! Oh no! *worries* Is that girl possessing him or something? Freaky! Poor Cagalli!
I wanna know what happens! E! *ignore my random squealing*
Hope you update soon! :) *hands you vanilla inspiration cookies*
tee hee
Melicress :D |
 reckless-rage 2008-01-25 . chapter 1O.o This is nerve-wracking. How is Athrun doing? At least he's not dead, right??
Your english/grammar/spelling is immaculate and I like that. There is nothing worse than seriously mangled english that make me cry. I like this fic, and I'll keep an eye on your updates and I promise to give you a review every chapter because I know how much writers like reviews, even if it's just a "OMG I love your fic!". In return you maintain the Athrun forum, yes? ^^ |
 Melicress 2008-01-16 . chapter 1O... i hadn't really looked at ur fanfictions before, silly me! :D This is cool! I really like where this idea is going! I wanna know who the strange girl is too! I really like the way you've organized the plot so far, it's nice to read! :)
Hope ya update soon!
Melicress |
 Infinite sky 2008-01-08 . chapter 1Hey I decided to check your newest story out :3
And I like it :P Its truly serious…..although I giggled a bit at the part where Zehina was laughing about his name!! Athrun seriously can’t take a joke! XD
Who are these people?? What is this little girl? What is going to happen? Please Update soon ^_^ |