This story is awesome!

I sort of love/hate it when Sasuke's thoughts get so close to discovering his predicament and then that voice inside him snaps him out of it, disracting him with the reality he's in now. I fully expect him to refuse to be diverted at one point. "You don't want to know," the voice said once. Sasuke will eventually decide that it's necessary to know, to understand.

Sasuke is good enough to kill and then severely handicap two of the sound four, but the sand siblings, the Skeleton guy, the Konoha genin, and the two jounin all have yet to make it to the Valley of End.

I theorize that Uchiha Madara's Mangekyo has the power to send someone's soul through time. It's not that wacky a theory, after all Kakashi's canon Mangekyo opens tears into other dimensions and or realities. Effectively you could say that Itachi momentarily transports his foe's mind to his in order to torture them for a seemingly indefinite amount of time. The only Mangekyo user that has any semblance of control over their Mangekyo though seems to be Itachi, but that could be from his excessive practice of it.

For example, the Uchiha Massacre, Sasuke, Kakashi, those guards at the gates of Konoha before he and Kisame went after Naruto when they were searching for Tsunade, and whomever else he needed to use such a convenient tool on in the duration of his work as an Akatsuki agent. Kakashi rarely uses his at all because he, as a result of its use, ends up in the Hospital for weeks. Of course if he knew its mechanics better then he'd probably use less chakra to operate it, but ironically he'll have to use more chakra in order to gain experience.

Hm, let's see... 1 dieing jounin with a level 2 curse seal and 4 experienced and minutely injured chuunin with level 2 curse seals that are used to working with one another up against 4 fresh genin, 3 recovering genin (one of which is a jinchuuriki), and 2 jounin (one with good trackng skills and the other a medic with a lot of chakra exhausted). Mix that with the loose and powerful canon that is the Sasuke from the future inside the Sasuke of the past with his conciousnesses battling it out in his mind and you have one major blood filled battle on your hands.


I talk too much,
-jw`chan ^-^'

I've reread this story several times and I hope you can soon add more to the story. I want to know what happens next. If one of Sasuke's teammates figures out what's going on. And if Sasuke realizes what's going on and controls it. It's like a more realistic time travel. I can't wait to read a new chapter so please hurry. :)

Very nice story. I read it all in a day. I cannot believe that you are able to show someone slowly (or rapidly) going insane.

I wonder how much of Sasuke's memories of the future are actually real. Also his memories of the future are going to be a lot of trouble. I am surprised Sasuke still has Amaterasu, but I wonder if he will eventually try something his 13 y/o body can't handle.

Anyway, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you have not forgotten this fic.

This is so cool!
Slightly confusing with all the flashbacks, yet it somehow fits.
Can't wait to read the rest!

hey, been reading your story and it is amazing! now if only you could update a little quicker. thanks

I just read your splendid time travel story. I enjoyed the disjointed nature of Sasuke's memories. I've also rather like character interaction (Naruto and Sakura at the ramen stand had great dialogue). I'm sorry you weren't able to work writing into your college schedule last year. Maybe you could put a note in your profile as to whether there will be updates before next summer. It is a rather well written story and I look forward to seeing the rest.

Excellent story. One of the rare ones that actually keep me guessing. I love the way Sasuke's memories are confused, and I feel all the characters are very much in-character.

This story is both enthralling and frustrating at the same time. But so far I'm absolutely hooked! Please update soon!
-Kat

Ah, this story is amazing! I am hoping and praying for updates in the near future -- I really want to see how Sasuke handles himself, having the chance to do things over again. Really, this is fantastic!

I am so happy that I found this story. I have been aching, positively ACHING to read a good Sasuke time-travel story. And then one day, lo and behold, I stumble upon this wonderful piece. Sasuke is so in character, his 13-year old self and 17-year old self, and for that matter, so is everyone else. You write very beautifully, and the way the past blends into the future works out so well.

I am very very interested to see where you will take this, because I had the notion that Sasuke would try to fix everything if he had ever traveled back, but at this point Sasuke is still disorientated and unsure of everything, so I don't know what's going to happen. I like that. Unpredictability is always good. It's been a couple of months... I'm not sure about your updating habits, but I hope that you will soon.

Thanks for the brilliant read so far.

This is really good. I love how you portray Sasuke's mindset, it's really fun to read.
Good job! =)

Oh wow PLEASE update! This was just so very intense! It sucked me in and I Have to know what happens next! You've taken something fantastical and made it fit into the mold of their reality, I love you :D

Amazing story. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please update soon!!

This looks very promising! Hope to read more someday!

About Jiroubou :

"he had narrowly avoided most of the massive black flames which had suddenly erupted out of nowhere when he was just about to knock the boy out. His right side was burnt in patches .."

Ive looked up how Amaterasu works . If Jiroubou caught some flames he would most likely be dead ...

"The flames are said to burn for seven days and seven nights, and cannot be extinguished with water or any other normal methods."

Also , the flames engulf everything thats in the wielders vision so a huge space must have been burning ...
There are also some other details about it .

Anyways , I liked your fic very much . Its very refreshing and original . Kinda reminds me of Two Steps Back (another good fic)

I hope you keep writing and Thanks :)