Reviews for Mixed With the Lightning of Slaughter

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Marz1 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abusegood chapter! can't wait for the update. so he doesn't go running off with the snake jerk this time? sure took him long enough. more soon please!
The Violent Tomboy 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseItachi has a sweet tooth? That's kind of...cute... I really like the insanity going on Sasuke's mind right now. I just pray that he won't make the same retarded choices, but the way that this is going, I think I'll be happy with almost anything you dish out.
Stalker of Stories 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseI love this story! It's positively amazing! And of course Itachi goes to sweet shops. Where else would he get quality pocky? SOS
SnickyPop 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseOh yeah, things are getting interesting! Once again, your ability to confuse things perfectly amazes me. (: Have fun at university! I just started high school, and I am so stoked.
firedraygon 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseOh, love how Sasuke's finally starting to figure things out, the poor kid. Hahah, Shikamaru's resignation at the end of his scene, with Naruto and co. showing up, is so amusing. Ouch, for a group of genin to take out some Oto-nin who beat jounin...not very good odds. XD Great chapter. Please write more soon! ~fd97
anotamous 2008-09-04 ch 12, anon.	abusetry to get the next update out before the fic is a year old
sillymail 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuse:D This was lovely. Sasuke is so out of it, it's almost funny.
anotamous 2008-09-04 ch 12, anon.	abuseCool! He's figuring everything out. I want to watch him kick ** future ninja style.
Beboots 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseThank you very much for updating! :D Squee, Sasuke is starting to remember! Like, more cohearantly! ... well, marginally. ;) I liked the flashback with the spider, then quickly switching to Kidoumaru. :3 Clever. "a genjutsu within a genjutsu". XD Oh yes, sure, Sasuke... :) I really liked the truth in this line: "It doesn’t matter if he’s lost his mind, Orochimaru-sama will destroy his mind anyway!” Woah - did Sasuke just use Amaterasu? BADASS! :DD I'm interested in the short line you had with Neji, regarding the limits of the Byakugan - I mean, he can see chakra, so his vision can be blocked in certain directions by people... does that mean that you could perhaps blind a Hyuuga by suffusing their vision with chakra...? (Oh, don't mind my musings...) "He cannot deal with the Oto nin now—doesn’t want to, wouldn’t be able to, and screw Orochimaru six ways to hell, there is no way he’s going to him now." YEAH! :DD Also, I like how he's sorting out his mind by repeating the things he knows - his mother's name, when his father arrived for dinner, etc. :) Very good. I really liked this line: "turning in upon himself as ouroboros, the snake which eats itself up in an unending pattern". :3 Awesome image. "Naruto’s third databook was just released, and apparently Itachi goes to sweetshops in his spare time? XD" What, seriously? I have to acquire this databook! :D I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D A confrontation between Sasuke and the Sound nin, and possibly with Konoha nin showing up to pick up the pieces...? :D I can't wait to see what happens! Thank you once again for updating!
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitt... 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuse... how... confusing... this chapter gave me a huge headache... update asap, plz...
frzntears 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseNeat and unique. I like the point you brought up in the beginning about the confusion after time-travel.
Shaitanah 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseOh, this is getting crazier and crazier) I adore this fic!
alolha123 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseWow! You updated earlier than usual. Must be a record... ;) Great chapter, like always. Bit confusing, but not confusing enough to not understand what's going on. I like all of the hyphens - you can see how Sasuke's broken thought process is going. >> "—of course, this must be genjutsu! He doesn’t stop to think, but instinctively slashes his blade in her direction—Madara, you bastard, he rages in his mind, goddamn him and his blasted Mangekyou Sharingan and his genjutsu—" >> Haha, he's finally realising something's not right. :D Took him long enough... though, he doesn't stop to wonder who Madara is or why he has a Mangekyou Sharingan... >> "Uchiha Sasuke, fourteen, self-acknowledged master of scowls and revenge—would react to the pressure." >> Must just be a formatting thing. There are a couple too many spaces between 'and' and 'revenge'. >> "with the spider finally dropping dead, Kidoumaru stumbling and twitching involuntarily." >> I love that comparison. Kidoumaru's just like a spider... I love how you related him to a spider that Sasuke hit back (forward?) at Orochimaru's hideout... >> For some reason, he is too slow. He keeps miscalculating the distance. And this is absolutely intolerable." >> Haha. 'Intolerable'. So Sasuke/Uchiha-like. Seems like things are somewhat going differently this time... I like the plot diverge. Very nice. :D Not much to critique on this chapter. Good luck at college. ;)
Srednasnhoj 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseSo that's how Sasuke escaped and came into the past. Love the update and it seems he is sorting out his memories now.
Violet Shadows 2008-09-04 ch 12,	abuseHeh, nice, but I'm still sitting on the edge of my seat.

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