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ProFfeSseR
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseAnother great story. Love your angela/jack pieces. There aren't many of them out there, so I'll read the rest later when I have the time. Just noticed one very funny typo: humorous as in the upper arm bone. I think it means being funny. The upper arm bone in latin is spelled humerus. Pronounced the same way, but something completly different if written.
HeroesBonesSNPB
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseaw that was so cute!! :D
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