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| skywalker05 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI must say I consider Sabewan equals Mara a very odd concept, but your writing in this story is quite good. I love the detail in the descriptions of Sidious and in "She kept polished stones from the Eastern Nebis Sea lined up on the windowsills. I used to count them and run my fingers over the smooth tops, careful not to move them at all..." Good short piece. |
| darklyromantic 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's short, but very, very awesome! You did a wonderful job, SobiGuru! xx |
| walutahanga 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseLovely. I'm partial to Sabewan, but this story is strong enough to stand on it's own merit without any particular pairing needing to be specified. It's a lovely mood piece. You use small details to illustrate a whole realm of emotion, which is a technique I struggle with, and admire when I see it used properly, as it is here. Bravo. |