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Reviews For: The Things I Dreamed

skywalker05
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseI must say I consider Sabewan equals Mara a very odd concept, but your writing in this story is quite good. I love the detail in the descriptions of Sidious and in "She kept polished stones from the Eastern Nebis Sea lined up on the windowsills. I used to count them and run my fingers over the smooth tops, careful not to move them at all..." Good short piece.
darklyromantic
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseIt's short, but very, very awesome!
You did a wonderful job, SobiGuru! xx
walutahanga
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseLovely. I'm partial to Sabewan, but this story is strong enough to stand on it's own merit without any particular pairing needing to be specified. It's a lovely mood piece. You use small details to illustrate a whole realm of emotion, which is a technique I struggle with, and admire when I see it used properly, as it is here. Bravo.
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