it seems to me thats you have stoped writing this story. i might be wrong i just read it a cupple days ago but i looks like its been over a year since the last update.
this was a very well written story. i find it particularly impresive becasue it is not based of of previus books. it is a fanfic based on a tv show. i would think that would be alot harder to capture in writing.
the story was exelent and i that you for writing it. it brought me much enjoyment. it was like an episode of the show.
as for critizism, you have probly noticed that i dont write very well. im a math and science kind of guy so i cant help out your writing in any way.
exelent story i hope you can find the time to maby finish it or give permition for someone else to finish i hate when things are left unfinished.

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I am a huge Ziva/Tony fan :)

This has to be one of the best stories I've read.
PLEASE update.

cliffhanger! this is so good! PLEASE update soon so i can find out what happens!

You need to finish this story. It's one of the best Tony / Ziva stories on fanfiction. It is cruel to leave us hanging!

Need more chapters! Need to know what happens next! Love Tony & Ziva!

I love this story! Please update soon!

You've got to keep going! This story is too well developed to not finish. Keep on writing!

Oh please tell me you're gonna finish this! It's awesome!

This story has been wonderful! Great Ziva/Tony interaction, intricate plot with lots of twists and turns, and suspenseful cliff-hangers. I can't wait for more!

OMG! WTH?!?!

Please update. You couldn't possible have left off at a more critical moment for Ziva and Tony!

PLEASE update. This story is fantastic, suspenseful, and extremely well researched. Every little nuance in the story is perfect, creating a realism that most stories couldn't even begin to rival.

Waiting for another brilliant chapter,
-K

This is very good.

Now sit down and finish it!

Wow, wonderful story. I was up all night reading it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

No..! My lovely Ziva! Don't let her die!