Awe! I thought it was pretty darn good for your first het! :D Even though it was ultra short I kinda liked it that way so I wouldn't go and think about how it’s so sad that Jiraiya dies...! D:( … I'm still emo about that...a little bit... Anyway, yes, I liked it! >:D and like other people reviewed, I liked how Jiraiya got "right down to business"! And the adding of Sakura into here was sweet, it reminded me of the time Jiraiya was "training" Naruto, and he had him go ask Sakura out; then later he pushed Naruto down that giant waterfall...if you can even call it that D: Overall, good! You should try it again sometime! :D

Hehehe, loved that fiction, especially the end where he mentally urges Naruto to keep asking Sakura out just to get laid. Really that just sums up our favorite Ero-Sannin! Thank you for writing!

-two finger salute-

Entrenched out.

LOL!! :P I liked how Jiraiya got "right down to the point" :P Nice story :)