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Reviews For: Second Wind - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

gabyhyatt
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abusegood fic
Tilde
2008-07-17
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou have a good story line, but your writing style seems a bit stakato and devoid of feeling.

Its to much bam bam bam, good to hav progress in the story, but it is interesting to read about sentiments and thoughts... Also I think Scarlett change just a bit to fast for it to be entirely belivable
Reven Eid
2008-07-03
ch 18,
abuse=)
imafallenangel
2008-04-14
ch 2,
abusethank you for keeping melly alive, i hated it when she died because shes myfavorite character!
lalakid87
2008-02-26
ch 35,
abuseI just finished reading your fic and I love it! Haha although some things were quite unexpected and not very common in a GWTW fic that was what made it interesting hehe! =D! I went all: D:! when Wade "shot" Rhett haha and then was shocked when Scarlett adopted Rhett's twins, thought she would be angrier. Oh well, I really enjoyed it. Another thing I noticed is that you made the characters pray to God more than in other GWTW fics, which is kinda of odd because I really don't remenber any of the characters being that religious, but it's awesome!
lil mutt face grl
2008-02-15
ch 35,
abuseOh, I’m immensely pleased that I decided to read this story. It was very pleasurable. The character development was interesting to read, but my favorite part out of the whole story is probably the ending. I thank you for writing it.
guitarhorselover
2008-01-29
ch 35,
abuseThat was great!
Dracoginnylover24
2008-01-12
ch 35,
abuseThese last 2 chapters have been great! I loved this story so much, the ending was the best. good Luck with future writing! :D
Aroon1190
2008-01-12
ch 35,
abuseThis was a really great story! i loved it. thanks
CaptScarlett
2008-01-12
ch 35, anon.
abuseThe End? Aw! Thanks for entertaining me the past couple of weeks. Glad to know you've got more ideas buzzing around. I look forward to your next fic. :)
Joyce LaKee
2008-01-11
ch 34,
abuseBe careful of your capitalizations and punctuations. Will be looking for more.
CaptScarlett
2008-01-11
ch 34, anon.
abuseJust wanted to let you know I'm still reading and enjoying your fic.
Dracoginnylover24
2008-01-09
ch 33,
abuseOh she has just got to be ok. I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :D
Dracoginnylover24
2008-01-08
ch 32,
abuseoh I so want to know what that something is...lol! :D Good Luck!
Dracoginnylover24
2008-01-08
ch 31,
abuseI can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
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