ok you piece of shit lissen to me and lissen closely!(dont care about my fucking spelling) ok fisrt DONT FUCK AROUND WITH OTHER PEOPLES SHIT! (meaning u brianless dult that you shouldnt RAT on people cuz trust me i will BRING YOU DOWN!) i know what you have been doing!(telling the people about other peoples lemons ! my god are you THAT INOCENT AND AFRIAD!) fuck kid get a life and GROW UP! well if that didnt go through you little brian then you truley r hopeless and yes i pulled (o-what-is-it? an Angel-Chan!) i RATED on you! HAHAH you may not think it but there is shit that is not aloud on here that you have done (not saying its just this story!) and you will be geting reviews like this from more then me (BE SURE OF THAT!) AND MORE THEN 1! so BITCH at ya soon (if your acount still exists! c yas jackass

ALOT better than ur old one! _

Kaiju monster

Add Yelan and Fuutie they are awsome, great story so far Ja ne!

Yay! Something that's SS but not too cheesy! Just to tell you... monster is 'kaijuu'. I think I'm gonna read your other version, just so I can see how much better it's become. Poor sensei...