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| JESSMARY25 2008-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow, if I wasn't a fan of them I would become one just by reading this. Beautifully done, just amazing. Very tasteful but still sexy and intimate. |
| Elainhe 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseYou still are the best at erotica, imo. :D I loved what you did wit the ending lines! Favorite phrase in this fic: "But he was spoiled. He wanted skin to skin to skin contact; her aware of him; her sighing and moaning as he touched her and his own descent into all-encompassing pleasure as she touched him. Basically she’d ruined him in the worst way … and in the best way." |
| Yemam2422 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Beautifully done. Very sexy and intimate. I loved your description of how entwined they became - like a sexy human pretzel (as weird as that sounds). Mostly, I just felt their connection - how deep and comfortable it is. Great job! |
| serenity2bliss 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Sexy and sweet and with a twist of fun in between ;) Love it! |
| Anki 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseBoth sexy and funny, well done. :) |
| peanut2lb 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseJust when I thought it couldn't get any hotter here and to think I forgot to bring my fan with me on vacation!! Hee-Hee. Very sexy and as steamy as ever. As always, I love your descriptions and word choice. |
| wjobsessed 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely-written. My fav line: "But he was spoiled..." how true :) A nice post-Christmas gift. |
| marialisa 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad you finished this fic Hot and sexy yet sweet too, as Danny realises that she is a lot more than just a 'solution.' Wonderful writing as always. You write with such a light touch and the cadence of your words as much as the words themselves creates the mood and draws the reader into the bedroom with them. |
| Brinchen86 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was really great! And hot! |
| prplerayne 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI am always awed by the wonderful imagery and emotions you paint with your word choices, and this is no different. The need, urgency, love, tenderness and wantonness all come through so clearly and come together to make a wonderful read! |
| notesofwimsey 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseOoh - how hot is that!? My favourite way to be woken up! I hope this is going into Heartfelt Erotica! |