Way to go Toshiro. Nicely done story.

how cute!

Aww, fluffy. Sorry, don't know where that came from. Nicely done though.

aw! (sniff sniff) that was so beautiful. and i think HitsuMatsu rules and Gin is an **. great fanfic. i really did almost cry.

LOVELY! What a wonderful start (er, second?) for your Bleach fics, I can't wait to read the other. I would love to see an expanded work once you're more comfortable, but as written this is simple, poignent and a nice mix of fluff and heartache (just the way I like it!). Nice job showing the differences between her love for each of them, and that such different kinds of feelings can co-exist and be complicated. in 400 words no less! Well done. ;)

Very nice oneshot. I like your interpretation of Matsumoto's feelings between the two important men in her life. Also, a very interesting way to portray Gin, as having never kissed her. Very nice chapter.

cute ^^

aw, so cute

I loved it. I like the way you showed what Hitsugaya could offer Matsumoto that Gin didn't have.

Nice fic! Don't worry about the length, my stories aren't any better. I don't like the pairing much, but this is quite good. I'll look out for more of your Bleach fanfics if you keep writing so well.