 DragonWolf82 2009-11-01 . chapter 23Quite the interesting story. Is the angle your going with that Harry is the heir of King Arthur? What about him and Tonks? Is he going to pop the question to her? Is Albus going to be successful in overturning their exile? What of Moldyshorts? |
 WhiteElfElder 2009-10-26 . chapter 23I love it, it seems that the ring Harry is wearing is acting as a wand or some other kind of magic focus; basically making what he thinks a reality. That is definitely one way of getting around his exile and unlawful magic repression. I am also glad to see that Harry and Tonks are still very much together and wanting one another...I started fearing that his new career and her's would drive them apart as happens with a lot of young cupples. |
 michaelc100 2009-10-25 . chapter 23i really love this story
cant wait for more |
 hpnut1 2009-10-25 . chapter 23I loved it! |
 Elitewarr 2009-10-25 . chapter 23update soon |
 hemotem 2009-10-24 . chapter 23An excellent read I am happy to see and update and look forward to seeing more of this in the future.
Keep the magic up I like the little things you are showing and look forward to see what other "Magic" is going to come.
Hemotem |
 Olaf74 2009-10-24 . chapter 23*removes his Jaw from the floor*
BLOODY HELL!
You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.
Please continue the story very very soon. |
 riegert8 2009-10-24 . chapter 23very good chapter |
 Fibinaci 2009-10-24 . chapter 23Its a small point in your story, but a huge one in canon, that Sirius never had a trial for Peter's capture to shed new light on. He was just chucked into Azkaban on Crouch Sr.'s say so.
I really liked their date and that it seemed like Tonks was making friends amongst her colleagues. |
 old-crow 2009-10-24 . chapter 14HI,
I have enjoyed your story so far. I do have a suggestion that you can consider for future chapters. Try different storytelling techniques. Throw in a bit of narrative from time to time. It will make your story go faster.
Also, you never really told us the basis that Harry and Tonks got their wands snapped. Fudge doesn't own the court system and Harry is a very high profile person. You could have someone explain what happened - why Bones let it take place or whatever.
Old-Crow |
 Salamander Hanzo 2009-10-24 . chapter 23great |
 Razial 2009-10-24 . chapter 22very good updates, I seemed to have fallen behind and I have just caught up and I have to say this story is really very well done keep it up
david |
 lady sakura cosmos 2009-10-24 . chapter 23good chapter |
 ILikeComps 2009-10-24 . chapter 23Good chapter. I really like how Harry is starting to use the magic naturally. It's also nice to see the relationship with Nym growing. Thanks for sharing! |
 Cateagle 2009-10-24 . chapter 23It's good to see matters continuing to slowly grow between Harry and Tonks; they are good for each other and their slowly growing relationship bids well to form a solid and unshakeable foundation for a very strong pair bond; in forcing them together, Cornelius may have done them a huge favor, not that he'll ever know or appreciate that. I rather suspect this would come as a shock to him.
Meanwhile, that little contratemps outside the club was amusing; they can't claim Harry did anything since they can't track him any more and they have no idea what happened to those Deeters, save that they *really* came up against someone better than them (*wicked chuckle* poor babies, it's just not fair for the bad guys to find they've annoyed rather more powerful good guys - at least from the bad guys perspective). 'Twill be rather interesting to see just how rigorously Amelia prosecutes those former in her department who were caught as Deeters, methinks the hammer will come down on them big time, she sounds like an honest, no-nonsense person. I doubt Tom, Cornelius, nor Albus will appreciate that. That Pettigrew was one of the Deeters and has now been thoroughly interrogated should make for some interesting news and reactions in many quarters. |