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Tentrees
2009-12-16 . chapter 23
I believe the interationc between the ring and Harrys magic and the banishment spells have made things the waythey are. Only when Harry and Nym want to come back will they.

As for the night. I forsee a ring bing given and a new Potter being started... After all Nym in base form could jump start anyone less they 96 hours dead and make a gay man strait for an evening.
jademornin
2009-12-15 . chapter 23
Thanks for answering my review and clearing up what a Lager is and how he can drive a fork lift at work. It was very insightful. I'd never heard of a Lager before so I learned something new and interesting. Anyway, thank you.

I love the hints of what is going on and how Harry and Nym are getting on in the Muggle World. My amusement knows no bounds on the fact the Purebloods are growing broke because Harry's money is leaving the Wizarding World.

The hints are wonderful as to how and what Harry is the Heir of. My money is, having read some of the reviews on who he may be heir of, that Harry Potter is the HEIR of Arthur Pendragon AND Merlin. Am I close or right?

So the Magical World has to want Harry and Nym back so much that it would end the exile. Interesting.

Anyway, keep up the good work.I look forward to more and would love to see how Fudge is "fairing" in the wonderful world since his great acts as Minister have come about. Death would be too quick and easy for him. He needs to not only see the results but experience first hand just what his choices have done. Also, what about the Dursleys? It seems that they may have had a subtle hand in helping Harry get thrown out. Will justice come for them too?
tmbrwlf
2009-12-12 . chapter 23
A suggestion for such times as Harry encounters death eaters, etc and the sword manifest's itself, is that they see an amoured knight, what better way to play on their fears and lead suspicions away from Harry, it would be unlikely that Harry would run around in plate and helm with sword in hand, not really the thing a "wizard" would do.

I have quite enjoyed the story, keep up the good work.
Zenoen-the-mac-user
2009-12-11 . chapter 23
great story
Der Ritter des Mondes
2009-11-19 . chapter 23
An excellent story. The concept of your magic is quite stunning in it's effects. A very enjoyable read with an amazing balance of... well everything. Not much else to comment on. Keep it up.
DragonWolf82
2009-11-01 . chapter 23
Quite the interesting story. Is the angle your going with that Harry is the heir of King Arthur? What about him and Tonks? Is he going to pop the question to her? Is Albus going to be successful in overturning their exile? What of Moldyshorts?
WhiteElfElder
2009-10-26 . chapter 23
I love it, it seems that the ring Harry is wearing is acting as a wand or some other kind of magic focus; basically making what he thinks a reality. That is definitely one way of getting around his exile and unlawful magic repression. I am also glad to see that Harry and Tonks are still very much together and wanting one another...I started fearing that his new career and her's would drive them apart as happens with a lot of young cupples.
michaelc100
2009-10-25 . chapter 23
i really love this story

cant wait for more
hpnut1
2009-10-25 . chapter 23
I loved it!
Elitewarr
2009-10-25 . chapter 23
update soon
hemotem
2009-10-24 . chapter 23
An excellent read I am happy to see and update and look forward to seeing more of this in the future.
Keep the magic up I like the little things you are showing and look forward to see what other "Magic" is going to come.


Hemotem
Olaf74
2009-10-24 . chapter 23
*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.
riegert8
2009-10-24 . chapter 23
very good chapter
Fibinaci
2009-10-24 . chapter 23
Its a small point in your story, but a huge one in canon, that Sirius never had a trial for Peter's capture to shed new light on. He was just chucked into Azkaban on Crouch Sr.'s say so.

I really liked their date and that it seemed like Tonks was making friends amongst her colleagues.
old-crow
2009-10-24 . chapter 14
HI,

I have enjoyed your story so far. I do have a suggestion that you can consider for future chapters. Try different storytelling techniques. Throw in a bit of narrative from time to time. It will make your story go faster.

Also, you never really told us the basis that Harry and Tonks got their wands snapped. Fudge doesn't own the court system and Harry is a very high profile person. You could have someone explain what happened - why Bones let it take place or whatever.

Old-Crow
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