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2009-08-11 . chapter 14
The scenarios was plausible and the actions in character. Marvelous work as always.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 13
That was amazing, simply stunning. I particularly liked the myriad of reasons behind their marriage though. It makes you wonder if the council of Hyuuga elders was using the mission for their own means.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 12
So simple yet rich in detail. I like how you showed an ordinary day in their lives.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 11
Very interesting. As always, I love the depth you give them.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 10
I really admire you for your analysis and examination of Naruto and Hinata. I agree that part of Naruto's thoughtlessness is not just lack of parental example but a means of protection and also lashing out. This was very realistic, Hinata is over her childhood infatuation and is beginning to see the reality.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 9
I'm glad you wrote more about the eyes. It's nice that Sasuke and Hinata were able to move on with their lives. After analyzing the situation, Sasuke initially saw it as a curse but now they will both be fine and are thankful to be alive and well.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 8
This one really had some depth, I liked your thoughts on the nature of the switched eyes. Sasuke's response and Hinata's actions were very in character. This one is simply amazing.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 7
Nice ending, that was hilarious!
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2009-08-11 . chapter 6
Wow, that was stunning in it's tragedy.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 5
Nice use of dreams, it added another layer to the fic.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 4
The idea was very interesting and original. You did a very good job of making me feel for the characters, they were so moving and alive.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 3
That was cute, I think Hinata got Sasuke's message. Poor Neji though. Your explanation of his circumstances was very fitting, I think it suited the fic perfectly.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 2
That was beautiful, so simple and sweet.
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2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Very nice, I like how you anaylzed them with the alternatives in their lives actually happening.
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2009-07-06 . chapter 15
I loved all of the different fics, each one is unique. The\humor, romance, friendship, angst, mystery, everything was enthralling and intriguing. I feel exhilarated from reading your work, it's simply marvelous. Please write more!
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