I didn't know that you updated again, wasn't in the usual place like the others! Glad I found it, though. :]

Chapter 1 : I like the twins alot, they're my favorite in this chapter! I think Drew fits Toki perfectly, she's kind and sweet and pure in a sense, and has been through alot in her life, just like Toki has been. I'm jealous Vanessa get's to know Pickles name. :[

Chapter 2 : I loved this chapter, like...it had action, drama, romance, humor, nice work integrating all of that. Lots of unexpected twists too~! I dunno if this is the end of your series but I hope it's not, I really enjoyed it, hope you write more soon!

I loved it...it made me laugh, cry, and all sorts of other emotional things...keep up the great work. ^-^