THAT was good. And I lived happily too, because I get to read cute little stories.

one thing to say:
ROFL AT THE ENDING :D
poor kakeru :]

ROTFLMBO! heehee i can totally see Ayame doing that...
lol! loved it!

lol, love Ayame as the fairy god mother and Kakeru at the end!

Aww...lmfao that was hilariousely fluffy? XD yes!

This is quite possibly the greatest thing I have ever read.

Period.

You kept to character so well I'm just about in awe.

Keep up the great work and consider yourself beta'd.

This one's hillarious!
Hahaha the very wicked Kakeru Manabe!

oh my goodness!!
that was amazing!

THIS WAS AMAZING! Yuki/Machi is one of my favorite pairings, and it made my day to read this. I laughed so hard my brother came in my room to tell me that I was being to loud (I threw a pillow at him). All the characters were perfectly in character, and Ayame was priceless. I adored the ending too. It was hilarious. I wonder if Machi would dislike this, since it's so flawless... Anyways, BEST STORY EVER!

pure genius ^^

I love he fact that after a fairy tale sentence you bring it all crashing down with the funniest comments. Such as: "One level up a baby started crying"... It was hilarious ^^

Thankyou foor writing it ^^ I enjoyed it very much ^^

great story, loved it

OMG THIS IS TOO FUNNY! WHY AM I CURSED WITH TERRIBLE HUMOR?! AT LEAST I CAN READ MASERPIECES LIKE THIS ONE! XD

That was hilarious! I love Yuki and Machi.

this was so hillarious and totally cute! ;)
keep it up,.,. :D

LOL! >.< Great story! Loved it! ^_^