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| The Honorary Title 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! It's hilarious! My mental image is great! Good name for the little boy, too. |
| Rac80 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseHA! cute story! |
| SG-1Reader 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAHA poor danny! |
| Belle 2007-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story so funny. |
| Samvalasam 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseROFL! thats so funny :D sam |
| infinitespace junky 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. It's a nicely balanced short piece. But personally I would have liked to see it extended -time to play - there was an X file story with a doll that said something like that. It's creepy. |
| ilna 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusefabulous! so well written, i can see it all happening in my mind. you have such a gift for prose - thanks for sharing it! |
| HAZMOT 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHehehe, oh that is so rich and funny. My boss had this Elmo doll in the office and it would not shut up. Every chance he got, he kept pushing the button and Elmo would speak the immortal words of "Lets Play," and it would laugh and laugh and laugh. I hated that toy ever since. But, I digress. I think that was Jack's punishment for Daniel by keeping his son occupied with repetative voices. And there was nothing Daniel could do about it. hehehehe. Obviously he got past the mental torture with one thing in his life that would sooth the savage Llama. Vala. This was great. Loved every bit of it. :D |
| starjems88 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuse:) loved it!! |
| QuasiOuster 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusePoor Daniel! But I have to say that that was a perfect ending. I had a big grin on my face over that one. Still, Daniel meltdowns, especially ones where he gets to curse Jack's involvement, are usually pretty funny. And of course Kael (I love that name) is completely oblivious and playing away which makes it even more hilarious. Great story. |
| spacegypsy1 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseTime to play! How fun was that story, huh.. oh very! And the way you used that last line was brilliant. I just love it when you're on a roll...keep it up! B |
| CrazyLikeaFox 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseReally cute story and quiet funny too. Poor Daniel sounds like he went almost around the bend, Love it. |
| acer-sigma 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI must say, you've been busy! Anyways great story, loved how the video has been driving Daniel crazy. Wonder if I can find one for my nephew that would do the same to my sister. Anyways it was great to see Daniel suffering from a mixture of pride and agony over his son and his antics. And of course what looks like a preprogramed response in the good Doctor whenever anyone asks him for the time. ;) Though his response to Vala did bring a smile. |