 Scribe of Turesa 2009-07-08 . chapter 1Ah! I liked it! it showed how much Leo needed that confirmation...how much it hurt him when he thought that Raph really hated him!!
Good work! |
 innocent-rebel 2009-01-29 . chapter 1Aw! This was so sweet! I loved it! Brotherly moments are the best, and I really liked how you brought closure to the scene. My only critque would be put maybe a large space or an X or something between when the time passes, you know what I mean? This was a very cute story! I loved it! |
 Mrs Turtle 2008-03-14 . chapter 1O nice little fic. It captures the relationship quite nicely, and has a good ending. good job. |
 Reijiro 2007-12-28 . chapter 1-claps- Very nicely done chica! It's lovely to see that unresolved fracture between Raph and Leo resolved in such a simple and heartfelt way. I've read a few interpretations of how that moment in the movie may have been resolved, but this one rings the truest for me in terms of the characters.
And I gotta say 'Go Donnie!' for reining in Leo a little. One thing I really love about the latest movie is the way it does portray Leo as being a bit arrogant, especially since he has been his own boss, so to speak, for over a year. And it's great to see the brainiac stepping in to help sort out his own family; rather than leaving Leo and Raph to wrestle it out, or Splinter having to step in to intervene.
Cheers!
Rei. |
 Jessiy Landroz 2007-12-28 . chapter 1I know Kyoudai means brothers, but Yuujin is either friends of companions; I'm not sure which one it was, but either way I was pouting when you described poor Raph's mental rollercoster in the first part of the story. It hurts to admit being a second-place turtle because of mean words thrown at each other, and thoguh the ending was pretty cute, the sappy thought of it made me want to roll my eyes! XD; in a good way, of course~ ;) |
 xLannyx 2007-12-27 . chapter 1Aw, that was sad but cute. Nice work =) |
 D.J striker 2007-12-27 . chapter 1wow very intrestin story plz more i can't wait 2 read more of ur story its amazin keep it up ;) |
 lost-katana 2007-12-27 . chapter 1Yay! A good story. I've been in withrawl lately.
This was very nice. That question has been bugging me for a while. I liked the way it ended up. And Don's intervention was perfect.
Good job! |