this oe makes me really sad...its one of those too little too late things eh...we can only hope there isnt so much heartbreak in the real one to hinata isnt looking so swell right now...

the last phrase
broke my heart :3

good work (:

have a nice day!

wow that was really great! :D

The. most. beautiful. thing. I. have. ever. seen. in. my. entire. life.

Loved it.

sad ; adorably sad .

Im not sure what to say.
But tis well written.

Oh and theres a small spelling mistake in –revival of your clan-

You wrote you instead of your. Just thought I would note that.

Could you write a Bradin/Nikki (Summerland)fanfiction?

Beautiful.

BeautifulbeautifulbeautifulBEAUTIFUL!

In your FACE, Sasuke! -does a dance-

It's awesome! Definitely going in my favorites. I LOVE it! But I don't ship Naruto with anyone, so eh... But That's okay, cause Naruto is cute, and Sakura is okay. And I can deal :D:D

Okay, byebye :D:D

That was a really awesome story even though I'm a total sasusaku fan~ You have good writing skills ^^

ouch, burn!

nice one-shot!

aw in a way i happy that shes w/ Naruto cuz he isnt an ** but... idk... its just kinda sad I really really liked

wow really good, perfect more than perfect seriously such a perfect story and i think you should continue a second a third and so on cuz this one shot is justs perfect

i love it really really love it

awsome... but... go sasusaku...

IT WAS SO SAD! i cried. hahaa. that was really well written. hope to see more from you.

Haugh...

NEE-CHAN.

(did I not tell you to go to bed last night, missy? I MEANT SLEEP, NOT WRITING.)

And oh my goodness...

I hurt so bad for Sakura. To chase after a shadow that is NEVER QUITE THERE.

(just like Sasuke's heart.)

The last line, though...I don't understand it.

And this makes me want to write a fluffy!SasuSaku, just to even out your angst. Grar.

I loved it, obviously.