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| Juliana-chan 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThe. most. beautiful. thing. I. have. ever. seen. in. my. entire. life. Loved it. |
| biancaBOMB 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusesad ; adorably sad . |
| Neitzarr 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseIm not sure what to say. But tis well written. Oh and theres a small spelling mistake in –revival of your clan- You wrote you instead of your. Just thought I would note that. |
| - 2008-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseCould you write a Bradin/Nikki (Summerland)fanfiction? |
| Fortune's Flaw 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. BeautifulbeautifulbeautifulBEAUTIFUL! In your FACE, Sasuke! -does a dance- It's awesome! Definitely going in my favorites. I LOVE it! But I don't ship Naruto with anyone, so eh... But That's okay, cause Naruto is cute, and Sakura is okay. And I can deal :D:D Okay, byebye :D:D |
| Ninjism 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really awesome story even though I'm a total sasusaku fan~ You have good writing skills ^^ |
| anonymousM 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseouch, burn! nice one-shot! |
| Inu-ru831 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseaw in a way i happy that shes w/ Naruto cuz he isnt an ** but... idk... its just kinda sad I really really liked |
| haliz 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusewow really good, perfect more than perfect seriously such a perfect story and i think you should continue a second a third and so on cuz this one shot is justs perfect i love it really really love it |
| slavetothekeyboard 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseawsome... but... go sasusaku... |
| BrokenHeartedCherry 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseIT WAS SO SAD! i cried. hahaa. that was really well written. hope to see more from you. |
| HPBabe91 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHaugh... NEE-CHAN. (did I not tell you to go to bed last night, missy? I MEANT SLEEP, NOT WRITING.) And oh my goodness... I hurt so bad for Sakura. To chase after a shadow that is NEVER QUITE THERE. (just like Sasuke's heart.) The last line, though...I don't understand it. And this makes me want to write a fluffy!SasuSaku, just to even out your angst. Grar. I loved it, obviously. |
| Rawr4cookies 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseOkay, FIRST OFF LADY! WHY did you wish ME a merry little xmas? Huh/ that made me sad and cry. and well, not really0but oh still yes, i miss you very much and then you claim you are busy you make a story0what kinda of crap is that? Oh wells...still, this was good...and short, so I guess it didn't take you too long... I really liked this line, "It was a dance we were playing, it seemed, one that would last forever." and the other one with Naruto, i think? he's the one saying it? "One of these days Sasuke, you’re going to turn around and she won’t be there! Instead, she’ll be with me, married and happy, the wife of the next Hokage! And you won’t have anyone to blame but yourself." That made me laugh and beam because, it's TRUE. he does treat Sakura a little trashy, and with it, i think Sakura is jsut not going to take it anymore and when he turns around-BAM! she's gone, just like that. and it'll be great, cause he totally had it coming, but still I do like SasuSaku but not as much as ShinoSaku-ROFL,WTFBBQ, I keed. I like SasuSaku and GaaSaku and KakaSaku-that one,thanks to you, weirdo. CHOOSE ONE PAIR ALREADY/ (loved and favorites) |
| Pinklillies 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have no read a SasuSaku in a long time THIS WAS GOOD! BUT, IF IT WAS sASUsAKU, why didn't it end SasuSaku? that made me sad. but i guess i could have seen it coming, it did HAVE ANGST in the descrip. so, it was expected un-huh. awesome job woman, awesome job. I love your Narutostories and i think you should update WTWB! |
| FanofInulover 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYES! allusions to Naruto and Sakura! good job on that, they should get married because Naruto is better than that ** ** Sasuke! Sorry, but you made my anger towards him heighten in this, because he was just an **. but once again, your writing style and just everything about what you did in this one shot was simply amazing, really. I was lost for breath when Sakura was, and I was growling in frustration when Sakura was, and it was simple in style and words and in her perspectie while looking back but so deep into meaning that it left that feeling of, being awe stuck at the end of it, desperately wanting more. great job |