um...wrock: Slytherin-style? eh. whatever. fleghk. (btw, "fleghk" is a word I made up in my geometry class. I was tired of doing...geometry!doodles...so I was just like, "FLEGHK!" and thus my word was birthed. Its definition is, "An exclamation of disdain.")

Maybe Tomorrow by The Remus Lupins is the wrock and rowl referrence in this 'un. Hawaiian: you said "Hoku-lile" but I think you meant "Hoku-lele"--shooting star. right??

I liked Draco's little interruption at the end. Nice job! Update soon!

Aw, i liked this one alot. Quite cute. Update soon!

I'm a little confused. I thought Lily was friends with Harry?

Hmm, she is interesting what with her relationship with the other gryffindors and hating harry. update soon!

fleghk. sure, you make fun of me puting in the best college basketball team on earth in MY Harry Potter fanfic but here you are honoring your hometown by making up a Quidditch team. I mean, you could have used the Thundelarra Thunderers or the Woollongong Warriors (both from Ausie) but no. Just go and make up some other team that doesn't exist...oh wait...none of it exists so nvm lol.

Good chapter, though. I can definitely relate to the whole sports-fanatics thing. Plus it's nice to see that you stayed true with Ginny becoming the journalist.

btw, Tar Heels are currently ranked number one and are undefeated :|

I liked in the first chapters how we got to see Pansy and Lily's relationship and how it came to that. Update soon!

Heh. That was pretty adorable. Not quite lol, more like...giggling on the inside ;)

I like the idea of this feudship, and I'd like to see it elaborated on a bit more.

That's sad... And shocking, I suppose.

Whoas. I'll settle this once and for all: CLEAR IS A STATE OF MIND. There we go (smiles smugly)

well, i havn't really got far in this fic. i like the idea of a new character in Ginny's year, but I kinda find Lily a bit mary-sueish. in fact, she is kind of as mary-sue as they come.
No offence, it may be that she'll get better as the story goes on (i really should read the whole thing before i judge) but she just seems too perfect. a better seeker than harry? same name as his mother? a bit the same as everyone else?
maybe all will be explained later (im just too impatient and had to review now) but I just think i'd find her more convincing if she was more flawed. sorry.
otherwise, i like the style and plot. keep it up

Interesting. I like the interaction and Lily's character. Still, her looking like Lily Potter is odd. update soon!

its good and i like the coincidence but i dont like the line "Ah, look, Malfoy’s finally getting it- from a girl, no less,” because you make it sound as if a girl cant take on Malfoy which isnt true at all since Hermione managed a nice slap across the face.