Your Ashe and Vaan have the best chemistry. The way they go back-and-forth--every interaction between them suits them so well. It's damn funny, too! Could picture it all perfectly.
End. Was. Greatness.

Hey, something new! I think it's great that youre starting to write again. Even if this is just to get going, i think it's still very good!

The ending with balthier... wow!