Great story.

No! How could you end it like that?

When Clark was in the car, begging her, I was begging right along with him!
How could she...?

But...?

I don't...?

NO!

wow, that's a wonderful history

please tell me their is a sequel

Oh my golly, I love you. That was a perfect Christmas one-shot and, even though the ending wasn't the typical fluffy 'I love you, you love me...', it was amazing. I completely believed and undestood the characters because you write them so well. Congratulations on such a wonderful fic. First.

Great story! Sad ending, but I love how it sets up what's to come in the Superman "mythology". I've been looking for something like this for a while. It's perfect.

Oh and that whole thing that Clark said about his relationship w/ Lana is completely true. It's about time he finally realized this.

aww the ending was so sad! i loved it anyway! really great story.

this was just so beautiful and tender and perfect. But such a sad ending! I guess it has to be that way, though. Great job!

That was awesome. I hope you continue and that wasn't all. Lois needs to realize that she needs clark.

WOW ! That was a great one shot.