Great oneshot. ^__^

No...! I want more! D: This was a fabulous story, I really liked it! <3

Holy crap, this 'erse is hella amazing! So Cloud erased part of his personality/psyche to fit in w/his new Pack? Damn, that took hella brass balls!

It was kinda hard to tell, but it looks like the Jenova sacrifies are just mostly dead or living somewhere else and nobody can know where they are. What's up w/that?

What can I bribe you with to get more chapters out of this golden creation? Tell me!!

Wow, interesting ideas! I wonder if you will write more..

An excellent story. Although it stands well by itself, do you plan on making a sequel. I wouldn't mind seeing Cloud mure Fair take down Demon Queen Jenova.

XD Good gods, Eileen's insults were the /best/! I had so much fun with this. A great deal of fun was had with the demon rituals and social quirks. It'd be great if you continued this. Like, more than great. It'd be awesome. Zack-awesome.

And that's a lot of awesome.

I loved this story. It is a bit heavy, but oh so sweet. And I really wouldn't mind reading a follow-up on this one, since there are a whole lot of story left that hasn't been mentioned yet. How well will Cloud fit in with the demons? Will Cloud be more troulbe than a basket of bored chicks? And what will Sephiroth's reaction to his new pack-member be? I for one would love to read that, so I hope you will oblige me one day, lol

Gah! This makes the second time that I've read this story, and I still can't help but want to know more! It's... it's not fair! You go off and make Cloud FORGET who he is, his mom is worried, the town people are weird, I have no idea if I should know who Nicholas Thorn is and Jenova is killing people! I really do like this story, in a weird way, but I wish I knew what happened!

Ze love... As awesome as always.

Ya gonna do more of this? 'Cuz if ya are I'd love to see it.

//huggles Cloud,Zack and Seph//

Wow...this is really...unique...and good...

Are you going to continue this and/or Thorns?

Because that would be amazing...they're both great stories and...I want more!!

Again its really good. Keep it up!

I thought I had reviewed this long ago. I have to say that, while I am only famaliar with FFVII, this story was seamlessly woven together. One of the things I really enjoyed was how true you stayed to Cloud's character. His determination and just overall stubborness.

I also liked the part at the end with the fate knife and how Cloud had forgotten himself and the reasons for it. I would love to see this continued (even if it is completely *awesome* as a one-shot) and I also liked how you left it open...so much left up to the reader. Just wonderful all around.

ACK! that can't be the end. Don't know anything about the stuff you crossed it with or much about FFIIV either, but it was a great story. Back to waiting for something else from you :P

//goes into rapture//
That was AMAZING. I wish it was longer... this has the beginnings of a marvelous epic. If you ever decide to write more on this, there will be squeals of happiness from this corner.

Don't ever stop writing FFVII stories. :-)
I don't know how to properly describe just how mindblowing good this story was.
As in the other FFVII story, your originality is fantastic and their characters mixed with instincts delightfully explored.
I'm honestly a little sad it is already finished, this is definitely one story I wouldn't mind being never-ending.

XD I love this story, I love all stories that you've written that I've ever read, and I cant wait for more. If I knew how I would build a shrine to you. As is I'll just send links to your stuff to all my friends to spread the joy of the wonderful stories you write.

As for this fic in particular, I love what you did with Cloud and Zack. I've been an FF fan from day one so its great. Cloud is usually a bit emo for me, but it works well in this story. I don't think I've ever heard of the world you fused it with, but the way you intergrated everything I don't feel more than a want to look it up, unlike the burning need that sometimes drives me crazy because I don't understand what all is going on.

On another note, I really want to read more of this story, see what happens next or when Cloud's 'lockbox' has to be opened. Also, I would so love to see what Vincient would be like in your world. In cannon he used to be a Turk.. XD Anyways, wanted to say I really appreciate your stories!!