You seriously need to turn this one into a full lenght story. SERIOUSLY! I really, really hope you do.


Kia

Number 6 is hilarious. "Carly would happily do the job her self." Classic line.


Kia

WOW! Can't wait for that sequel!! Great story!!

Another great story!

Fantastic! An ingenious way to write a story too!! Loved it. On to the next one...

Love the title of this series, Walking the Line. I used the song Walk the Line in a Jarly story before.

Love this part:
We’ve talked again this before and you know the rules. You’re allowed to work here on the condition that you stay away from Sonny’s table and all the regulars who sit there. Don’t make me call your momma about this.”


It was too funny when Carly stole Jason's wallet. Ha! Genius.

You created a fantastic universe for this story.

great story looking forward to the sequels

Great chapter! I absolutely loved it, and I would love to see a sequel. I wonder what dear old Uncle Luke is going to say to that...

love it i want more :)

I always thought that if Jason got any where near the altar with Robin, Carly would only go so far, and then either do something crazy or walk away.

Oh my I absolutely loved this short it could also be caled the way I wish things had happened. Man you do good work!

“I love you, Jason. I always have and some part of me always will, but I don’t want to hate you. I don’t think I could live with that, so it’s best to make the break now, before it comes down to that. Someday, you’re going to remember this and you’ll understand, but I won’t be around. Maybe I’ll still be here in Port Charles or maybe I won’t be, but you should come and find me, because no matter where I am or who I’m with, you’ll always be my best friend.”

LOVE THAT!!

Looking forward to reading the next one.

This was fabulous. I absolutely loved the first truth!

This is great - light hearted and a great way to blow off steam while you write your other story (hint:Hint)

Can't wait for the next ah.. chapter.

I love the idea tha you are going to write 100 jarly stories. 100 times the goodness and joy that is my Jarly. Yay!

Love Fact number 2.

Fact number 5 was the best though. I hate the Carly/Court friendship but I love your reasoning behind it.

This is an amazing line

She went through the motions, eventually she was able to love Michael – he was after all she had left, but for the small corner still clinging in her ribcage, her heart was simply gone & Jason took it’s ghost with him when he left.