I loved this story! I want more!! I wanna see Gado and Jenny's fight!!
Your writing is very good, I got stuck in all your fanfics, can't stop reading them!

Hope you have a lot of inspiration for this and more fanfics!!

hellos

the story is really good!

but make sure dont make it so long =D

Im still having trouble wif the names...

but dats my fault =P

Good stuff as always keep it up.

Wow, Jenny really is cruel...Poor Hai. Anyway I liked this chapter ( personally the part where Uranus appear ).Thanks for the greetings. What's up with that Zenno...that weirdo that attacked Long and Jane or Shina or whatever...Anyway I'm waiting for the next chapter.

Wow, Jenny really is cruel...Poor Hai. Anyway I liked this chapter ( personally the part where Uranus appear ).Thanks for the greetings. What's up with that Zenno...that weirdo that attacked Long and Jane or Shina or whatever...Anyway I'm waiting for the next chapter.

Boy,do you want to kill your readers of curiosity? Each chapter you make has a new mysterious character.It's good to make secret of them but sometimes, it drive me crazy to wait until next chapter.
Anyway it's getting better than the other chapters. You're becoming good in this.
*Where's the horse-guy? Is he on his day off?

This chapter really awakened my curiosity.Now I want to know what type of beastorization John has and who's the guy in black suit.Hey!! I don't saw my name in the greetings when I read the start of the chapter but I liked it ntinue with the good work!

I liked this chapter but there some characters that I didn't saw Stun and Busuzima.If you want a idea(please accept it!),you can make a character(woman) with beastorization of sphynx.

Good stuff great work keep it up.

I liked the beastorizations from the Indian and the cowboy(yrra) but what I really liked was Xion beating the cowboy and sleeping after(what a sucker). Continue creating chapter to extend this history.One idea is to create a griffon beastorization.

The plot thickens and Xion is an ahole good stuff.

What... Yugo went down that easily? Pfft... even if the other guy was strong, he still should've lasted longer than that. Oh well, I suppose it's a good thing Alice is a nurse and can take care of all his wounds. Assuming, of course, that Yugo didn't get his whole head busted open. *cough*

Oh damn, I knew someone was going to use Uriko for her powers from childhood. >_>; They're going to have one hell of a time figuring out how to unlock it, of course. And even if they do, I hope she'll kick their asses. :3

Ahahaha, so Kenji is willing to give up his bachelorhood, huh? ^_^ This was kinda interesting. Poor Mitsuko, though, having to see her daughters in danger and all.

Heh nice stuff good work now the story is really getting interesting.