Hadn't read this before - great story. Loved Rodney and Ronon coming to terms with each other. :)

Nice. Reminds me of that old show Sliders. Maggie was a former military Captain and Wade was no soldier and at first they didn't get along. Maggie buried her feelings and had no problems leaving someone behind, but after Wade saved her life instead of leaving her behind, her perspective somewhat changed and she admited Wade had shown her something with that act. Later after they killed a T-Rex together (yes, an actual T-Rex), the two seemed to bond more and became friends. Maggie even later admitted she was going to miss Wade when it seemed like the end of their journey and was touched by her death.

I really really enjoyed this story, nice to see Ronon whumpage.

Loved the Rodney and Ronon interactions thought Rodney was braver than usually depicted so was great.

Favourite line has to be :

"Because the bear looked like a marmoset on steroids, Sheppard thought grimly"

Great work

Talk about intense! Your stories are so full of detail and emotion that they always make for good reading. Next time I'll start reading a lot earlier in the evening so I go to bed at a decent time! ;)

Nicely done, great story. Loved the Shep whump and the banter between McKay and Ronon. Glad they worked out their differences.

oh! I love that! I got the link from Lorr on GW and had to read it (because I love your work :D )

Thats a great story! Love the "team" stuff with Ronon, Sheppard and Rodney, especially having to work things out early on. I'm sure it wasn't a smooth assimilation for Ronon into Shep's team

Well done! *applause*

Very good story! You really nailed the prompt. And, Shep whump is always good! thank you

Oh, you are so good. And this one little bit just did it for me:

>Rodney and Ronon looked at Teyla, then at each other.

“Did I say I was smarter than you?” Ronon asked Rodney.

“No. Did I say I was stronger than you?”

“No.”

“Huh.”<

After all the bickering, the bared teeth, the threats of killing each other, it would take something that *simple* to make them realize they were both being total dopes. Yeah, I liked that. :)

And good whump. Very good, believable whump. =^.^=

Loved the Ronon-Rodney dynamic in this. The two of them do make for the Pegasus version of the Odd Couple. This story made me want to hole up in a little cabin with a roaring fire, hot cocoa, and three hawt guys.


BTW, Kristen was all gloaty - she thinks she got the best of the Secret Santa fics :)

Amazing story, awesome writing and very cool story concept

I liked this very much. Thanks for sharing.

:-)
-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

loved the story mckay ending up as the hero :)

This was a wonderful story. Very tense and action packed-just the way your fans love them! I enjoyed the bonding as well. Again, great story.

Great story!!

My favorite line (I swear, every Atlantis story should have a version): "FUBAR much, he thought angrily."

Excellent writing. Loved the characterizations... I've never seen Ronon and McKay at each other that much, but the fighting AND the resolution were perfect! Loved this.

Very nicely done. I could see it all running in my mind like a movie. Thanks for sharing.