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Reviews For: Sky Pirate's Treasure

Lady PenThier
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseOh..My..Gosh. I love Balthier and Penelo Pairings! I was beginning to think I was the only one. Everywhere I went it was Balthier/Ashe, Balthier/Fran, Penelo/Vaan, Penelo/Larsa, or Penelo/Basch. Basch! I mean come on he's old enough to be her dad!

Anyways, I really loved this story. You did a fantastic job keeping to Balthier's character.

I hope I'm able to do the same in my story.
Wei Jiangling
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseVaan really doesn't know how lucky he is. XD I liked this look at Balthier's point of view on that scene. Well done.
Spoons1899
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseha, that scene has always tugged at me to write something like this, but you beat me to it and did it beautifully! I loved the ending line, and the way you described Balthier. It seemed very consistant with his personallity. I would love to read more in this similar vein? Great job.
Cailin Skylark
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseaw! this is wonderful! i just happened to find this little story and it certainly is a sweet gem. nice take on the handkerchief ^_^
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