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| Lady PenThier 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseOh..My..Gosh. I love Balthier and Penelo Pairings! I was beginning to think I was the only one. Everywhere I went it was Balthier/Ashe, Balthier/Fran, Penelo/Vaan, Penelo/Larsa, or Penelo/Basch. Basch! I mean come on he's old enough to be her dad! Anyways, I really loved this story. You did a fantastic job keeping to Balthier's character. I hope I'm able to do the same in my story. |
| Wei Jiangling 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseVaan really doesn't know how lucky he is. XD I liked this look at Balthier's point of view on that scene. Well done. |
| Spoons1899 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseha, that scene has always tugged at me to write something like this, but you beat me to it and did it beautifully! I loved the ending line, and the way you described Balthier. It seemed very consistant with his personallity. I would love to read more in this similar vein? Great job. |
| Cailin Skylark 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseaw! this is wonderful! i just happened to find this little story and it certainly is a sweet gem. nice take on the handkerchief ^_^ |