i like this story please continue it 2 the very end.
i love it and how you write. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

i really like this story... nartuo is so cute... screaming papa and hugging himself to sasuke... so cute.

Wah! Write more May-chan! Kyuu-chan needs to find his baby brother!

me: i want to be a cat
tohru: me too for some strange reason
X: black cats are cool
me: YaY let's make this KatDay! everyone get your ears
me: (puts on orange ears)
tohru: (puts on red ears)
X: (puts on black ears)
me: TEEHEE

~great story

me: woah
tohru: and i thought you were weird
me: yeah me too
X: you both are weird
N&T: hehheh

~great story

me: natie
tohru: tohru
X: X
all: and we make up the Yaoi*Fanfic*Mob!
me: we'll tell you what we luved
tohru: what we really luved
X: and what we wanted to burn and never be seen again
me: but don't worry, it was uber awesome
tohru: naruto was cute
X: i would have killed the little monster
N&T: EVIL!

~great story

Please please please continue, i wanna see what happens, poor Naru, Poor Kyuubi

Nice! I love the last chapter especially. Very soap opera-esque.

I do have one thing to say though. It can get confusing when you have speech, then someone else doing something, like this:

“The male ones.” Kyuubi’s eye twitched.

You MUST review!! :P You really have a nack this!! :)

Have I reviewed yet...not sure actually. But anyway. I freakin' love this story and Kyuubi is gonna get the shock of a lifetime! I can see him now, coming out of the room or the shower in the morning to discover his little brother standing RIGHT there in front of him! XDD

but i dont get it . on the like first chapter you said naruto was around 10 years old

please make more of these im gonna die happy if you continue this story TT.TT

omg! if this were in spanish(i could read it but english is easier for me) this would be the PERFECT tele novela! somone in a coma, someone in the hospital, kidnapped, sex, jealousy! agnst! i luv it! pls oh pls write more soon!

very good story, loved it, keep updating plz, thnx!! ^-^

im guessing this angel is naruto...